视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more natural: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases (e.g., “a scanning view,” “castle part,” “how each play fell”). Use correct word forms and articles. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph historic streets and old castles because their architecture tells a story about the place. This helps me remember details later when I look at the photos or make a short video.

建議: Give a clear preference with reasons and use correct grammar. Start with a direct statement (I prefer...), then add one or two specific reasons linked with connectors (because, and, also). Avoid contradictory clauses and imprecise vocabulary like “reasonable way to a left.”

範例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy quiet, peaceful environments surrounded by trees and flowers. The calm atmosphere helps me relax, and I like photographing natural details such as streams and wildflowers.

建議: Answer directly and add specific reasons and examples. Use correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “I was born there,” “Vietnam has many special places”). Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences. Provide one or two concrete examples of places or features you like.

範例: I prefer views in my own country, Vietnam, because I grew up there and it feels familiar and meaningful. For example, I love the terraced rice fields in the north and historic towns like Hoi An, which combine natural beauty with cultural history.

× Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different route and a scanning view to capture memory of the place I visit.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different routes and scanning views to capture memories of the places I visit.

The sentence has pluralization and quantifier issues: 'route' should be plural 'routes' to match 'different', 'a scanning view' should be plural 'scanning views' to match context, 'memory' should be plural 'memories' because multiple places are implied, and 'the place I visit' should be plural 'the places I visit' to agree with photographing different routes/views. Use plural forms when talking about varied or multiple items.

× Uh, for example, I often photograph castle part and historic street so it can later look back at the imagine, uh, and uh, video.

✓ For example, I often photograph parts of castles and historic streets so I can later look back at the images and videos.

Articles and noun forms are incorrect: 'castle part' should be 'parts of castles' to indicate sections of many castles; 'historic street' should be plural 'historic streets'; 'it can later look back at the imagine' is ungrammatical — use 'so I can later look back at the images and videos'. Use 'the' only when referring to specific known items; here general plural nouns are appropriate.

× I recall how each play fell and that I.

✓ I recall how each place felt and that I visited them.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and seems to contain wrong words: 'play fell' is likely 'place felt' and the clause 'and that I.' is incomplete. Correct to a complete clause 'and that I visited them' or 'and how I felt there' depending on intended meaning. Ensure sentences have a clear subject, verb, and object to convey meaning.

× Absolutely because I live in a urban area or in a quiet and peaceful place so I love the surrounded there by the tree flower and I think is reasonable way to a left.

✓ Absolutely, because I live in an urban area and I also enjoy quiet, peaceful places, so I love being surrounded by trees and flowers, and I think it is a reasonable way to relax.

Use 'an urban' (article before vowel sound). Several structural and article errors: 'the surrounded there by' should be 'being surrounded by'; 'tree flower' should be 'trees and flowers' (plural); 'is reasonable way to a left' is unclear — likely 'a reasonable way to relax'. Ensure correct article use ('an') and proper gerund forms ('being surrounded'), and plural nouns when referring to multiple items.

× Oh, to be honest, I prefer view in Vietnam because I was born in there.

✓ Oh, to be honest, I prefer views in Vietnam because I was born there.

Pronoun and article use: 'in there' should be 'there' (avoid redundant preposition), 'view' should be plural 'views' to match general preference. Use 'born there' not 'born in there'.

× I lived in there for about 20 years.

✓ I lived there for about 20 years.

Remove the extra preposition 'in'. 'Lived there' is the correct past tense phrase. Ensure prepositions are used appropriately with verbs of location.

× So I think Vietnam have many special and are very special to me.

✓ So I think Vietnam has many special places and is very special to me.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Vietnam' (singular) requires 'has' not 'have'. Also the noun following 'many' needs a countable plural — 'many special places'. The second clause should use 'is' to agree with singular 'Vietnam'.

× Umm, many place and umm umm historical nature is very.

✓ Umm, there are many places and historical natural sites that are very special.

Original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Many place' should be 'many places'; 'historical nature is very' is incomplete—specify what is meant, e.g., 'historical natural sites that are very special'. Use complete clauses and correct plural forms.