视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答案需要更自然、结构更清晰，并减少语填充（uh, um）。开头用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，例如拍摄什么、为什么以及怎样构图或感受。此外注意语法（动词形式、名词复数）和词汇选择。

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like photographing flowers and natural landscapes because they often show unique colors and shapes. When I travel, I try different angles and lighting to capture the beauty I haven't seen before.

建議: 回答需更准确的时态和语法，并直接给出偏好理由。先用一句清晰的主题句表明偏好，然后用一到两句具体原因和频率说明（例如住在城市、只在假期去乡村）。避免混用时态（was / am）。

範例: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful scenery and fresh air. However, I live in a city, so I only visit the countryside on holidays or weekends to relax and take photos.

建議: 回答要更具体，用明确对比来说明两者的不同之处。先用一句总体判断（both），然后用连接词（however, while）分别说明国外和国内景色的特点，给出具体例子或感受，避免重复和不准确词汇（waves用得不当）。

範例: I enjoy views in both my country and abroad. While my country offers familiar landscapes and cultural scenery that feel comforting, visiting other countries lets me discover new styles of architecture and natural features that are exciting and different.

× Yes, I like, uh, when, when I go out, I like take some photo of the flower, uh, natural saying and something I haven't seen and in different, different waves, I can see the different beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like, uh, when I go out, I like taking some photos of flowers, natural scenery and things I haven't seen, and in different places I can see different kinds of beauty.

问题类型8：动词 + -ing 形式。在英语中，动词 like 后如果表示爱好或习惯，常接动名词（-ing）而不是不带 to 的动词原形。原句中使用了 “like take” 应改为 “like taking”；另外 photo 应用复数 photos 表示泛指多张照片；flower/natural saying 用词不当，改为 flowers 和 natural scenery；wave 用错为 places 或 kinds。建议：在 like 后用动名词，注意名词单复数及常用搭配。

× I think I like rural areas but I living in city so I can't see the contents every day so I just go there when I was in holiday.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas but I live in the city so I can't see the countryside every day, so I only go there when I'm on holiday.

问题类型6：现在时问题。原句中主语 I 与动词时态不一致，使用了现在时应为 'I live' 而不是 'I living'（缺少助动词或 -ing 时态不正确）。另外，表达习惯应使用 'prefer' 比较常见；'contents' 用词不当，应为 'countryside'；'when I was in holiday' 时态与语境不符，应使用现在时 'when I'm on holiday' 或 'when I'm on holidays'。建议：陈述习惯或事实时用一般现在时，注意动词形式和常用名词搭配。

× I think I like both. Umm, they're different. When when I go to another country I can see the different waves. When I was in my country I can see some beautiful waves.

✓ I think I like both. Umm, they're different. When I go to another country I can see different scenes. When I am in my country I can see some beautiful views.

问题类型8：动词 + -ing 形式（兼有词汇搭配问题）。原句中 'When I was in my country I can see' 混合了过去时和现在时，语态不一致，应为一般现在 'When I am in my country I can see' 或简单现在 'When I'm in my country I can see'。此外，'waves' 用词不当，应改为 'scenes' 或 'views' 来表达不同的景色。建议：保持时态一致，选择合适的名词来表达“景色/场景”。