视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, try to be more specific and concise: avoid repeating the word "memorable" and add one concrete detail (time of day, emotion, or camera type) to make the response more vivid. Use a linking phrase to connect the example to your general statement.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. When I go for a walk in the early morning, I often stop to capture the riverside and the flower beds because the soft light makes the colours look vivid. For instance, last weekend I took several close-ups of tulips with my phone, which turned out very well.

建議: You answer the question clearly but your supporting detail is repetitive and vague. Improve by giving one or two specific contrasts between rural and urban views (e.g., quietness, open space, types of subjects) and use a linking word to structure the reason(s). Keep it to two to three sentences total.

範例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the landscape changes a lot as you move — for example, fields, wooded paths and small streams. As a result, I often find unique compositions and quieter scenes that are easier to photograph.

建議: Your response is direct and expresses a clear preference with a reason. To strengthen it, replace the broad statement about "exhausted" with a more precise explanation (e.g., novelty, cultural variety, different landscapes) and add a short example of a memorable foreign view to support your point.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy the novelty and different types of landscapes and architecture. For example, when I visited the coast of Portugal last year, the dramatic cliffs and colourful houses provided scenery I had never seen at home.

× I prefer views in rural areas to urban areas because they vary in the scenery that they provide.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because they vary in the scenery they provide.

Use 'those in' to avoid repeating 'urban areas' and to correctly compare two groups. Also, omitting 'that' before 'they provide' makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: say 'those in urban areas' when comparing 'rural areas' with 'urban areas'.

× With every turn I find something different and something memorable.

✓ With every turn, I find something different and memorable.

The original is wordy and slightly repetitive. Combining 'different' and 'memorable' after 'something' is more concise and natural. Add a comma after the introductory phrase 'With every turn'.

× I prefer views in other countries because I feel that I have exhausted most of what my country has to offer.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I feel I have exhausted most of what my country has to offer.

The sentence is largely correct but can be tightened by removing the unnecessary 'that' after 'feel'. This makes the present perfect 'have exhausted' clearer and more natural. Keep present perfect to indicate experience up to now.

× I'm always excited to take in new scenery and to explore new places whenever I travel.

✓ I am always excited to take in new scenery and explore new places whenever I travel.

Combine parallel infinitives by omitting the second 'to' for conciseness: 'to take in' and 'explore' are parallel. Using the contracted 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but in a formal correction use 'I am'. This keeps tense and meaning consistent.