视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kullanın; gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltın. Ayrıca neden fotoğraf çektiğinize dair spesifik bir örnek verin ve iki-üç cümleyi geçmeyin. Örneğin, hangi anları hatırlamak istediğinizi ve bir fotoğrafın o anı nasıl koruduğunu belirtebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I like taking photos, but only of moments I want to remember. For example, I often photograph small details like a street mural or a sunset because they remind me of how I felt at that time.

建議: Cevabınızın açık, dilbilgisi açısından doğru ve doğrudan olmasına dikkat edin. Soruyu bir konu cümlesiyle yanıtlayın (şehir ya da kırsal) ve nedenini bir ya iki destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın. Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıklı bağlantı kurun.

範例: I don't have a strong preference between urban and rural views. I enjoy cityscapes for their energy and architecture, but I also appreciate countryside scenes when I want peace and natural beauty.

建議: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve uygun ifadelerle yeniden yapılandırın; ‘I don't care the boundary of all countries’ gibi ifadeler karmaşık ve biraz uygunsuz olabilir. Kısa bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın ve neden seyahat ettiğinizde ya da günlük hayatta farklı ülkeleri ya da kendi ülkenizi tercih ettiğinizi açıklayın. Örnek vererek cevabı zenginleştirin ve gayriresmi kısaltmalardan kaçının (wanna → want to).

範例: I don't mind whether the view is in my country or abroad; I focus more on the experience. For instance, while traveling abroad I enjoy discovering new cultures, but at home I appreciate familiar places that bring comfort.

× Yes, but I don't waste much time for this.

✓ Yes, but I don't waste much time on this.

Use 'waste time on' not 'waste time for'. The correct preposition after 'waste time' is 'on'. Suggestion: learn common verb+preposition collocations and practice them in sentences.

× Just uh, if I think I have to remember this moment, I can take a picture of everything.

✓ Just, uh, if I think I have to remember a moment, I can take a picture of anything.

'Everything' is odd here; 'anything' fits because the condition is hypothetical. Also use 'a moment' rather than 'this moment' for general statements. Suggestion: use 'anything' for indefinite objects in conditional sentences and 'a' for a nonspecific single instance.

× It might be stupid things or meaningful, it doesn't matter.

✓ They might be stupid things or meaningful; it doesn't matter.

The subject refers to 'things' (plural), so use plural verb/pronoun 'they'. Also separate clauses with a semicolon or period. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to the noun number and punctuate independent clauses correctly.

× It doesn't matter where am I or her with.

✓ It doesn't matter where I am or who I am with.

Word order in questions (where am I) is not used in statements. Use subject + verb: 'I am'. Also use 'who I am with' to refer to a person. Suggestion: use statement word order in declarative sentences and use 'who' for people.

× In my daily routine, I'm just a human and I don't care the boundary of all countries.

✓ In my daily routine, I'm just a human and I don't care about the borders between countries.

Use 'care about' not 'care the'. 'Boundary of all countries' is unnatural; 'borders between countries' is idiomatic. Also 'about' is required after 'care'. Suggestion: learn verbs that require 'about' and common collocations like 'borders between countries'.

× I just wanna stay at the moment and enjoy my time.

✓ I just want to stay in the moment and enjoy my time.

Use 'want to' instead of informal 'wanna' in formal speech; the correct preposition is 'in the moment' meaning focused on the present. Suggestion: replace informal contractions in formal test contexts and use 'in the moment' for being present.