视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap kısa ve tekrarlı; dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hataları var. Daha doğal ve etkili bir yanıt için: (1) Doğrudan konu cümlesi kullanın: neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğinizi açıkça söyleyin. (2) Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. (3) Bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin (örneğin hangi durumlarda rahatladığınız, hangi tür manzaraları sevdiğiniz). (4) Cümleleri düzgün gramerle oluşturun ve basit bağlaçlar kullanın (because, so, for example).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I like capturing sunsets and city skylines since their colours and shapes make me feel calm and inspired.

建議: Cevap çok kısa ve gerekçesiz; sınavda puan artırmak için tercih nedeninizi ve bir veya iki somut örnek ekleyin. Ayrıca tek kelime cevaplardan kaçının ve kısa bir açıklama cümlesi ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architectural variety of cities. For instance, I like photographing modern buildings and busy streets, which offer interesting shapes and lighting.

建議: Cevap anlaşılması güç ve dilbilgisi hataları fazla; düşüncenizi net ifade edin. (1) Net bir tercih cümlesi kurun. (2) Nedenlerinizi mantıklı ve özgül örneklerle açıklayın (örneğin farklı mimari tarzlar, peyzaj çeşitliliği). (3) Olumsuz veya belirsiz kelimeler ("pitiful") yerine uygun sıfatlar kullanın. (4) Tekrarları çıkarın ve 2–3 cümleyi geçmeyin.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different architecture and landscapes that I can't find at home. For example, traveling abroad lets me photograph historic streets and unique natural scenery, which inspire new ideas for my photography.

× Yes, I like taking pictures and different views because it's a more more relaxed for many peoples and it's.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it's more relaxing for many people.

The sentence has several errors: 'different views' needs the preposition 'of' to show what the pictures are of (preposition error, ID 11). 'a more more relaxed' is incorrect word choice and article use; use 'more relaxing' to describe something that makes you feel relaxed (adjective/adverb issue, IDs 13 and 22). 'peoples' is incorrect plural; use 'people' (singular/plural and article issue, IDs 1 and 22). Also remove the extra 'it's' at the end for clarity. Suggestion: use 'pictures of different views' and 'more relaxing for many people.'

× I prefer only urban areas.

✓ I prefer urban areas only.

The original sentence is understandable but the placement of 'only' is awkward. 'Only' should modify 'urban areas' by being placed after the object: 'I prefer urban areas only.' Alternatively, 'I only prefer urban areas' is possible but can imply a different nuance. Suggestion: place adverbs in a position that clearly shows what they modify (adverb placement, ID 20 and adjective/adverb use, ID 13).

× I prefer views other countries because other country is improved, improved your themselves and it's pitiful.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because other countries are more developed, and it's a pity.

Missing preposition: say 'views in other countries' rather than 'views other countries' (preposition error, ID 11). 'Other country is improved' is ungrammatical: use plural 'other countries are more developed' (article/plural and adjective use, IDs 1 and 22). 'Improved your themselves' is incorrect pronoun and reflexive use; likely intended 'more developed' or 'improved themselves', but 'themselves' should refer to 'countries' which is awkward; use 'are more developed' (pronoun/reflexive and adjective issues, IDs 15 and 13). 'Pitiful' is not the best collocation; 'it's a pity' or 'how sad' is correct. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure: 'other countries are more developed, and it's a pity.'

× And also abroad like like everything is beautiful and.

✓ Also, abroad everything seems more beautiful.

The original is a sentence fragment ending with 'and.' Remove repetition 'like like' and complete the thought. Use 'abroad everything seems more beautiful' or 'I think everything abroad is more beautiful.' This fixes sentence structure errors and adverb placement (IDs 26 and 20). Suggestion: avoid repetition and finish the sentence with a clear verb and object.