视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然、简洁并有结构。开头直接回应问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持（如拍什么类型的风景、用何种设备、拍照的目的），避免重复与填充词（uh, and）。练习时可默想两三个要点，按顺序说。

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually use my phone to capture landscapes and cityscapes because photos help me remember places and moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and interesting buildings when I travel.

建議: 答案逻辑不清且有语法和用词错误（如“used in open areas”）。应先给出明确立场，再用具体原因和例子支持，使用连词连接句子并减少犹豫词。注意名词与形容词搭配（high buildings → tall buildings）。

範例: I prefer urban views. I find tall buildings and lively streets fascinating, and I enjoy taking photos of architecture and city lights. For instance, I like capturing skyscrapers at night because their lights create dramatic scenes.

建議: 回答要更具体并流畅表达原因。可以说明喜欢国内风景的原因（熟悉、文化联系、未曾去过的地方想去），并给出一两个具体例子或经历，避免语法错误（like “I haven't visited some provinces”）。

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the culture and landscapes. For example, there are many provinces I haven't visited yet, and I enjoy watching short travel videos to learn about them before I go.

× I often take pictures uh, through my phone and uh, take pictures.

✓ I often take pictures with my phone.

原句中重复“take pictures”且介词用法不当。常用搭配是 “take pictures with (a device)”。建议用“with my phone”替代“through my phone”，并删除重复词以使句子简洁。

× I think it can uh, keep the great memories and that I can uh, stay and the good memories of for myself.

✓ I think it can keep great memories for me.

原句杂糅了多个短语（keep the great memories / stay and the good memories of for myself），用词和词序混乱。应使用固定表达“keep memories for me”或“help me remember good times”。建议简化为“keep great memories for me”。

× I think I prefer used in open areas because I think the high building is very gorgeous and I like the high buildings because I want to, uh, visit the high buildings.

✓ I think I prefer open areas in cities because tall buildings are very impressive and I like them because I want to visit high places.

原句结构混乱：'prefer used in open areas' 不合语法；单复数和指代（the high building / the high buildings）使用不当。需重组句子并保证主谓一致及明确指代。建议使用“prefer open areas in cities”并将“high building(s)”改为复数或用代词保持一致。

× So I think I like urban areas.

✓ So I think I like urban areas.

句子本身语法正确，但与前句衔接重复“I think”。可保留原句或合并为“I prefer urban areas.” 若改为“prefer”更简洁。此处标注为主谓一致检查，通过。

× Well, I prefer views in my own country. Actually I still don't visit some province.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country. Actually I still haven't visited some provinces.

“still don't visit” 时态和形式不正确。表示至今未去过应使用现在完成时“haven't visited”。此外“some province”应为复数“some provinces”或用“some provinces/parts”。

× I through the short video know some places very well.

✓ I know some places very well through short videos.

原句词序不当且缺少介词短语位置调整。应将“know”置于主句并用“through short videos”作方式状语，且 video 应用复数或加冠词。