视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitations and filler words, speak in complete sentences with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to make it coherent (for example, "also" or "for example"). Keep it to under five sentences and avoid trailing off at the end.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, I often photograph natural scenes like mountains and the ocean when I travel outside Dhaka, and I also capture architectural sights in the city. These kinds of pictures help me remember places and improve my photography skills.

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "for example." Finish with a complete concluding phrase rather than an unfinished sentence.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because I love nature. For example, rural places have lots of greenery and clear views of the sun, and they often include mountains or the sea, which make my photos more striking.

建議: Remove filler words and organize the answer: state your preference, give specific examples, and add a brief reason. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "the longest sea beach") and linkers like "for example" and "also." Keep it within three sentences.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it offers the landscapes I enjoy. For example, Bandarban and Sajek are great for mountain scenery, and Cox's Bazar has the longest sea beach, which is perfect for coastal photographs.

× I like taking pictures of different views, umm, In fact I love uh taking picture of both uh, natural and uh, architectural uh, views umm, when I am uh, outside Dhaka, I love to take picture of nature for an example, umm, mountains, oceans and uh, if I'm in city uh, I love.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views. In fact, I love taking pictures of both natural and architectural views. When I am outside Dhaka, I love to take pictures of nature, for example, mountains and the ocean, and if I'm in the city, I also enjoy city views.

The main issue is incorrect use of noun forms after verbs: 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural) and 'take picture' should be 'take pictures' (verb + -ing/ plural noun). Also 'oceans' is usually 'the ocean' or 'the sea' in this context, and articles before 'city' are needed: 'in the city'. Use of -ing after 'love' is correct, but the noun must be plural when referring to general activities. Suggestions: use 'taking pictures' for general hobby, ensure plural for countable nouns when talking generally, add articles where needed, and break into clear sentences. Note: This correction focuses on verb + -ing and related noun number as per the requested grammar types.'},{