视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirilmeli; kelime bilgisi ve dilbilgisi hataları düzeltilmeli. Kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın, ardından bir veya iki destekleyici neden verin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (uh, I, etc.) çıkarın ve "photogenic" kelimesini doğru bağlamda kullanın veya bunun yerine "I don't like having my photo taken" gibi daha doğal bir ifade tercih edin. Örnek olarak olumlu/olumsuz bir neden ve bir küçük detay ekleyin (örneğin; rahat olmama veya mahremiyet).

範例: I don't really like having my photo taken because I feel uncomfortable in front of the camera. For example, I often worry about how I look, so I usually avoid posing for pictures at social events.

建議: Cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi geliştirilmelidir; kısa ve net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın ve ardından spesifik bir neden veya örnek verin. "Highly buildings" yanlıştır; doğru ifade "high buildings" değil, "tall buildings" veya "skyscrapers"dir. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleyi genişletin ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

範例: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy the skyline and tall buildings. For example, I like walking among skyscrapers and visiting rooftop cafes to enjoy the city view.

建議: Daha organize ve doğru dilbilgisiyle cevap verin. "Etcetera" kullanmaktan kaçının; bunun yerine tam bir cümle söyleyin. "My hometown has not beautiful nature" yerine "my hometown doesn't have beautiful natural scenery" gibi doğru yapı kullanın. Cevabı bir tercih cümlesiyle başlatın, ardından nedeni ve bir örnek verin. Ayrıca iki kısa cümleyi bağlamak için "because" veya "while" gibi bağlaçlar kullanın.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different kinds of scenery. For instance, Finland has stunning natural landscapes with forests and lakes, while my hometown lacks such natural beauty.

× No, I don't like taking pictures because I, I not, I am not a photogenic because, uh, so I am not taking a photo anywhere.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures because I'm not photogenic, so I don't take photos anywhere.

The student used incorrect pronoun and negation forms ('I not', 'I am not a photogenic') and awkward repetition. Use the contraction 'I'm' and the adjective 'photogenic' without an article. Use 'don't take photos' to express habitual action. Suggestion: practice correct negation order (subject + auxiliary + not) and adjective usage for people. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer uh, urban areas, uh, because I like highly buildings and skyscrapers.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like tall buildings and skyscrapers.

The phrase 'highly buildings' is incorrect: 'highly' is an adverb and cannot modify the noun 'buildings'. Use the adjective 'tall' to describe buildings. Also remove filler 'uh' and redundant commas. Suggestion: use adjectives (tall, large, modern) directly before nouns to describe them. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I prefer other countries, etcetera. Finland. Finland has a beautiful nature, but I hometown, my hometown has not beautiful nature.

✓ I prefer other countries, for example Finland. Finland has beautiful nature, but my hometown does not.

Several structural errors: 'etcetera' is inappropriate in this context; 'Finland' should be connected properly; 'a beautiful nature' is incorrect—'nature' is uncountable and does not need 'a'; 'my hometown has not beautiful nature' uses wrong word order and negation. Use 'does not' with the verb for present negative. Suggestion: combine short fragments into full sentences, avoid countable articles with uncountable nouns, and use correct auxiliary for negation. Grammar problem type ID:26