视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 用简洁、语法正确的句子回答，注意时态和拼写错误，避免冗长重复。可以先给出主题句，然后用1-2句具体细节支持，并用连接词使语言更连贯。例如注意将“had I travel”改为“travel”或“travelled”，将“Android”改为“angles”。

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy capturing beautiful scenery when I travel because photos help me remember special moments. For example, I often share my best shots on social media, and I like experimenting with different angles and lighting to get the perfect picture.

建議: 回答要直接开门见山，修正语法和句子不完整的问题，避免模糊表达（如“that something about”）。提供具体比较理由并使用连接词如“because”或“however”。保持在最多5句内。

範例: I prefer urban views because I love the city skyline at night with its lights and distinctive architecture. I also enjoy rooftop viewpoints and city parks, as they reveal different aspects of city life and offer interesting photo opportunities.

建議: 答案整体较好，但注意口语中的衔接与完整性，可略微精简并修正语法（如“much easier”前加主语或用“It is”）。增加具体例子会更有说服力。保持句子自然流畅。

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the landscapes and traditions. For instance, visiting coastal towns reminds me of childhood family trips, and it’s also easier and cheaper to travel domestically, so I can explore more places.

× I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I had I travel.

✓ I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel.

原句使用了“had I travel”，这是不正确的时态和语序。这里表达的是习惯性或常发生的动作，应使用一般现在时的“whenever I travel”。建议记住：表示经常或习惯的动作用一般现在时（I travel），不要使用过去式或改变语序。

× Photography is relaxing hobby for me and I like to experiment with different Android and lighting to get the perfect shot.

✓ Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot.

原句缺少冠词“a”导致名词短语不完整；另外“Android”显然是拼写或用词错误，语境应为“angles”（角度）。两个并列句之间建议用逗号加连词使句子更通顺。建议注意冠词用法及常见单词拼写。

× I definitely prefer urban views that something about city skyline at night with all the light and interesting architecture that I find really exciting.

✓ I definitely prefer urban views — there is something about the city skyline at night with all the lights and interesting architecture that I find really exciting.

原句中“that something about”结构混乱，缺少连接词且语序不对。改为“there is something about...”能正确引出感受；此外“light”需用复数“lights”更符合语境。建议使用固定表达“there is something about...”来描述某物带来的感觉。

× I also enjoy rooftop views and city parks because they show a different size of city life.

✓ I also enjoy rooftop views and city parks because they show a different side of city life.

原句使用了“size”而非应有的“side”，这是用词错误（量词/名词选择错误）。“a different side of city life”是常见表达，用来表示城市生活的不同面貌。建议积累固定搭配以避免此类错误。

× Plus, much easier and cheaper to travel around my own country.

✓ Plus, it's much easier and cheaper to travel around my own country.

原句缺少主语和系动词，导致句子不完整。应加上“it's”或“it is”构成完整句子。建议写作时检查句子是否包含主语和谓语，确保句子完整。