视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct grammar (use present simple), and keep to at most 3–4 sentences. Add one brief reason and a short example to enrich the answer.

範例: Not really. I usually prefer to enjoy the scenery rather than take photos because I find it more relaxing. For example, when I visit the coast I like walking along the beach and remembering the moment instead of photographing it.

建議: Improve grammar and coherence: use plural/singular correctly (rural areas), include a clear topic sentence, use a linking phrase for reasons, and give a specific example with one or two details. Keep answers under five sentences.

範例: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because of the natural scenery and cleaner air. For example, when I visit villages near the mountains I enjoy hiking and breathing fresh air, which helps me relax.

建議: Clarify meaning and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer (I prefer views in my own country), avoid tense errors (I have never been abroad), and give specific examples with correct nouns and adjectives. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I have never been abroad. For instance, in Indonesia there are many beautiful places such as volcanoes, beaches and traditional villages, so I enjoy exploring those landscapes.

× I'm not really into taking a photograph while I went out, I usually just enjoy it, uh, nature or it's, umm, beautiful scenery.

✓ I'm not really into taking photographs when I go out; I usually just enjoy nature and beautiful scenery.

Original has wrong tense and form: 'while I went out' mixes past with present preference — use present simple 'when I go out'. 'Taking a photograph' is acceptable but plural 'photographs' fits general habit. 'Enjoy it, uh, nature or it's, umm, beautiful scenery' is ungrammatical; remove filler and use 'enjoy nature and beautiful scenery'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and plural for general activities, and use correct gerund phrase 'taking photographs'.

× I prefer rural area rather than urban area because its nature, natural scenery and the weather.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because of their nature, natural scenery, and the weather.

Errors: singular 'rural area'/'urban area' should be plural when speaking generally ('rural areas', 'urban areas') and wrong comparative construction 'prefer X rather than Y' is acceptable but 'prefer X to Y' is more natural. 'Because its nature' uses incorrect pronoun and structure — use 'because of their nature'. Also include commas for list. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preferences, 'prefer A to B', and 'because of' before reasons.

× For example, in village there are a lot of mountain and fresh air.

✓ For example, in villages there are a lot of mountains and fresh air.

Problems: missing article with 'village' — when speaking generally use plural 'villages' or 'in the village' with article. 'a lot of mountain' should be plural 'a lot of mountains'. 'Fresh air' is uncountable and correct to keep singular. Suggestion: choose plural for general statements: 'in villages there are a lot of mountains and fresh air' or 'in the village there is a lot of mountain scenery and fresh air'.

× I prefer fields in my own country since I never go abroad before.

✓ I prefer fields in my own country since I have never been abroad before.

Error: 'never go abroad before' is wrong tense and verb form. Use present perfect 'have never been abroad' to express life experience up to now. 'Prefer fields in my own country' is acceptable but could be 'I prefer the fields in my own country' depending on context. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences and correct past participle 'been' after 'have'.

× For example in Indonesia there are a lot of beautiful nature place like a mountain, a sea or its traditional.

✓ For example, in Indonesia there are many beautiful natural places like mountains, the sea, and traditional villages.

Multiple problems: 'a lot of beautiful nature place' mixes quantifier and noun forms — use 'many beautiful natural places'. 'Like a mountain, a sea' should be plural or use articles correctly: 'mountains' and 'the sea'. 'Its traditional' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'traditional villages' or 'traditional culture'. Suggestion: use adjective 'natural' before plural noun 'places', choose correct quantifier 'many', and list items in parallel form.