视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và sửa ngữ pháp; tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “very love”); thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể về trải nghiệm chụp ảnh để làm nội dung thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and clear my mind. For example, last weekend I photographed the riverside at sunset, and capturing the changing colors made me feel calm and creative. Besides reducing stress, photography allows me to express my mood through composition and light.

建議: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (số ít/ số nhiều, cấu trúc) và biểu đạt tự nhiên hơn; mở rộng bằng một lý do cụ thể hoặc so sánh ngắn với vùng đô thị; sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

範例: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and less crowded than cities. For instance, quiet fields and forests let me relax and notice small details like birdsong, whereas urban scenes often feel noisy and rushed.

建議: Câu trả lời nên gộp thành một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh câu rời rạc; cải thiện ngữ pháp và dùng ví dụ cụ thể (địa điểm hoặc hoạt động) để minh họa lý do vì sao thích cảnh trong nước.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because familiar landscapes and local parks make me feel at home. For example, I often walk along the national park near my town where the trails and waterfalls help me unwind and recharge.

× Yes, I very love it because now it's very exciting.

✓ Yes, I really love it because it's very exciting.

Use 'really' or 'very much' to modify 'love'; 'very' cannot directly modify 'love'. Also 'now' is unnecessary and may confuse tense; omit it for clarity.

× It helps me reduce stress and clears my head.

✓ It helps me reduce stress and clear my head.

Parallel structure requires verbs after 'helps me' to be in the base form (infinitive without to): 'reduce' and 'clear', not 'clears'. Use consistent verb forms for clarity.

× So I very love it.

✓ So I really love it.

As above, use 'really' or 'very much' to modify 'love'. 'Very love' is ungrammatical.

× For me, rural areas is really, really good.

✓ For me, rural areas are really, really good.

Subject 'rural areas' is plural, so use the plural verb 'are' not 'is'.

× I also get the opportunity to escape from the hassle and bustle of the city and clear my head.

✓ I also get the opportunity to escape the hassle and bustle of the city and clear my head.

With 'escape' we usually omit 'from' when followed by the noun phrase 'the hassle and bustle'; 'escape from' is not incorrect but 'escape the hassle' is more natural here. Either is acceptable; suggested correction improves naturalness.

× For me. Views in my country are much better, I enjoy skipping the hustle and bustle of the city to clear my head and I often go to walks in nature which makes me feel very relaxed.

✓ For me, views in my country are much better. I enjoy escaping the hustle and bustle of the city to clear my head, and I often go for walks in nature, which makes me feel very relaxed.

Fixed sentence separation and punctuation. Replaced 'skipping' with 'escaping' or 'getting away from' because 'skipping the hustle and bustle' is unnatural. Use 'go for walks' rather than 'go to walks'. Added comma before 'which' and conjunction 'and' for proper sentence structure.