视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, use correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Aim for 2–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary like "landscapes", "scenery", "preserve memories".

範例: Yes, I love photographing different landscapes. I enjoy both urban scenes and rural scenery because they capture everyday life and natural beauty, and photos help me preserve memories to look back on later.

建議: Provide a clearer structure: give a direct preference (or say you like both) then contrast with linking words (for example, "On the one hand... On the other hand..."). Reduce repetition and correct grammar ("streetlights", "give me unforgettable memories"). Add one specific example to support each point.

範例: I like both, but for different reasons. On the one hand, urban photography appeals to me because of dynamic streets, streetlights and candid human expressions; on the other hand, rural views attract me with sunsets, open skies and peaceful landscapes that create lasting memories.

建議: Answer directly and finish the thought: state your main preference clearly, use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, singular/plural), avoid repetition, and add a specific example or reason. Use linking words like "because" and "however" to make your contrast logical.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because they are tied to childhood memories and familiar emotions; however, I also enjoy traveling abroad to discover new landscapes and cultural scenes that broaden my perspective.

× I love to take picture of different views, different sceneries.

✓ I love to take pictures of different views and different sceneries.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (plural). Also 'sceneries' is uncommon; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use 'different scenery' or 'different scenes'. Use 'and' to connect the two items clearly.

× It is saving uh, the memory fresh.

✓ It keeps the memory fresh.

The verb phrase 'is saving the memory fresh' is unidiomatic. Use 'keep' + object + adjective (keep the memory fresh). This corrects verb choice and word order.

× It is capturing the beautiful view for future to review and to enjoy the beauty which uh, people or God created.

✓ It captures beautiful views for the future to review and to enjoy the beauty that people or God created.

Use present simple 'captures' to state a general fact. 'For future to review' is incorrect; use 'for the future to review'. Use 'that' to introduce the relative clause. Plural 'views' fits the context.

× In urban areas I love streetscape, St. lights, the beauty of people, the action and the emotions which are giving the street views.

✓ In urban areas I love streetscapes, street lights, the beauty of people, the action, and the emotions that give the street its character.

Use plural 'streetscapes' and 'street lights'. 'St. lights' is abbreviated and informal; expand to 'street lights'. The clause 'which are giving the street views' is awkward; revise to 'that give the street its character' for clarity and correct relative clause usage.

× In rural areas I'm enjoying the beautiful scenery, the sunset, sunrise, the beautiful sky and all this is giving are giving me unforgettable.

✓ In rural areas I enjoy the beautiful scenery, the sunsets and sunrises, the beautiful sky, and all of this gives me unforgettable memories.

Use simple present 'I enjoy' to express general preference rather than present continuous. 'Sunset, sunrise' should be pluralized. Remove duplicated 'is giving are giving'. Use 'gives me unforgettable memories' to complete the idea and correct verb agreement.

× I will be honest, the view in my own country are more close to my heart and they are giving me different emotions.

✓ I will be honest: the views in my own country are closer to my heart and give me different emotions.

'View' should be plural 'views' to match 'are'. Use comparative 'closer' rather than 'more close'. The verb phrase can be simplified to 'give me different emotions' to match plural subject and improve fluency.

× They are related to many precious memories with my childhood and my lifetime when I I was in my home country.

✓ They are related to many precious memories from my childhood and my life when I was in my home country.

Use 'memories from' rather than 'with'. 'My lifetime' is awkward; use 'my life'. Remove duplicate 'I'. This corrects preposition and pronoun/reflexive issues and improves natural phrasing.

× But of course I like to explore the world and I I would like to see new places, new views and enjoy the.

✓ But of course I like to explore the world, and I would like to see new places and new views and enjoy them.

Remove duplicate 'I'. Complete the trailing phrase 'enjoy the' by adding the object 'them' referring to places and views. Add a comma before 'and' for clarity. This fixes the incomplete sentence and structural problem.