视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn nên nói rõ, ngắn gọn và chính xác: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes, I do) rồi nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (picture → pictures; hubby không phù hợp nếu ý là "hobby"), và rút gọn câu dài thành tối đa 3–4 câu. Dùng liên từ thích hợp để nối ý (because, so, and). Hãy chú ý phát âm và chia động từ (taking pictures, helps me).

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures, especially when I travel, because it helps me remember interesting places. It is also one of my hobbies, so I often try to capture different views to keep memories.

建議: Trả lời nên rõ ràng: chọn một đáp án chính (urban or rural) rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với 1–2 lý do cụ thể. Sửa ngữ pháp (I love taking pictures of urban views; skyscrapers; when I travel to the countryside). Dùng liên từ để nối mạch logic (because, however, although). Hạn chế lặp từ và câu dài không cần thiết.

範例: I prefer urban views because I grew up in a big city and I find skyscrapers fascinating. However, when I travel through the countryside by train, I also enjoy photographing peaceful landscapes for contrast.

建議: Câu hỏi hỏi về trong nước hay nước ngoài, nhưng câu trả lời lại nói về urban vs rural — bạn cần trả lời đúng câu. Trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer views in my own country/other countries) rồi nêu nguyên nhân cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (reflect the lifestyle of people; bored → boring) và tránh mâu thuẫn (urban peaceful? contradictory). Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng, dùng linking words như because or although.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and architectures that I haven't seen before. For example, photographing foreign cities helps me learn about local life and gives me fresh perspectives.

× Well yes of course, I really love taking picture a few especially when I travel to another place and it's also one of my hobbies and take a picture in not only help me to satisfy my hubby but also to help me keep my memory about this place.

✓ Well, yes, of course, I really love taking pictures, especially when I travel to another place. It's also one of my hobbies. Taking pictures not only helps me to satisfy my hobby but also helps me keep memories of the place.

The student used 'taking picture' where the correct gerund+noun form is 'taking pictures' (plural) and later used 'take a picture in' incorrectly. Use 'taking pictures' or 'taking a picture' consistently. Use 'helps' with singular subject and 'keep memories of' rather than 'keep my memory about'. Suggestions: use gerund phrases properly (taking pictures), match singular/plural, and use 'helps' for third-person singular verbs.

× Well yes of course, I really love taking picture a few especially when I travel to another place and it's also one of my hobbies and take a picture in not only help me to satisfy my hubby but also to help me keep my memory about this place.

✓ Well, yes, of course, I really love taking pictures, especially when I travel to another place. It's also one of my hobbies. Taking pictures not only helps me to satisfy my hobby but also helps me keep memories of the place.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally. Also 'a few' was misplaced and unclear. 'My hubby' is likely intended as 'my hobby'. Use plural for general activities and correct the word choice.

× Taking pictures not only help me to satisfy my hubby but also to help me keep my memory about this place.

✓ Taking pictures not only helps me to satisfy my hobby but also helps me keep memories of the place.

When the subject is 'taking pictures' (singular gerund phrase), the verb must be 'helps' (third-person singular). Use 'helps' twice in the correlative structure 'not only... but also... helps' or rephrase to repeat 'helps'. Also fix word choice errors ('hubby' -> 'hobby').

× ...and take a picture in not only help me to satisfy my hubby but also to help me keep my memory about this place.

✓ ...Taking pictures not only helps me to satisfy my hobby but also helps me keep memories of the place.

The preposition 'about' is not the best collocation with 'keep my memory'. Use 'keep memories of' or 'remember the place'. Also 'in' was incorrectly placed after 'take a picture'. Use correct prepositions and collocations.

× Well, personally if I love taking picture the view of urban area because I was born in a big city so I'm familiar with the sky skyscraper.

✓ Well, personally I prefer taking pictures of urban views because I was born in a big city, so I'm familiar with skyscrapers.

The student mixed tenses and used 'if I love' incorrectly. Use present simple 'I prefer' for general preference. 'Taking picture the view' should be 'taking pictures of urban views' and 'sky skyscraper' is incorrect; use 'skyscrapers' or 'the skyline'. Ensure consistent present tense for habitual preferences.

× So when I have a a train to travel to I countryside, I really love taking the view of this way because it's extremely peaceful.

✓ So when I take a train to the countryside, I really enjoy viewing the scenery because it's extremely peaceful.

'Have a train to travel to I countryside' is ungrammatical. Use 'take a train to the countryside'. 'Taking the view of this way' is awkward; use 'viewing the scenery' or 'enjoy the view'. Fix word order and adjective use to make the sentence natural.

× Personally I prefer the the view in urban area because I find it much peaceful and is also reflect the symbol life of people in display and moreover because of being born in a in a city so I'm familiar with high skyscraper which is very bored with me.

✓ Personally I prefer the view in urban areas because I find it more peaceful and it also reflects the lifestyle of people. Moreover, because I was born in a city, I'm familiar with tall skyscrapers, which I find boring.

Several article errors: 'the the' duplicate, missing articles before 'urban area' and 'high skyscraper'. Use plural 'urban areas' and 'skyscrapers'. Use comparative 'more peaceful' and correct verb 'it also reflects'. 'Bored with me' is incorrect; say 'which I find boring'. Use articles 'a' or 'the' appropriately and correct noun forms.