视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp và giảm lặp từ. Nên sửa ngữ pháp (taking picture -> taking pictures; more grateful không phù hợp). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể bằng cách dùng liên từ để làm rõ lý do.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because varied backgrounds make my photos more interesting. For example, I like capturing sunsets and busy streets since they add colour and context to portraits.

建議: Cần trả lời ngắn gọn, tránh tiếng 'uh' và lặp từ. Sửa cấu trúc (prefer in the city -> prefer urban areas) và thêm ví dụ cụ thể về tòa nhà hoặc góc chụp. Dùng từ nối để liên kết ý (because, for example, so).

範例: I prefer urban areas because tall buildings and varied architecture give me interesting subjects to photograph. For example, I enjoy photographing modern skyscrapers at night and bustling markets during the day because they offer diverse colours and lighting.

建議: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, chính xác ngữ pháp (skyscrapper -> skyscrapers) và tránh lặp. Nên nêu rõ lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể: loại cảnh muốn thấy, hoạt động sẽ làm. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, for example, and).

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they often have iconic landmarks and skyscrapers that I haven't seen at home. For example, I would love to visit a famous city skyline and try local restaurants to capture both architecture and street life.

× Of course, I think that taking picture with different background will have my picture beautiful and more grateful.

✓ Of course, I think that taking pictures with different backgrounds will make my photos more beautiful and attractive.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally (singular/plural issue). 'Background' should be plural 'backgrounds' for the same reason. The phrase 'will have my picture beautiful' is incorrect structure; use 'will make my photos beautiful' (verb + object + complement). 'More grateful' is not appropriate to describe a photo; 'attractive' or 'appealing' is better. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and use 'make' to express cause and effect.

× I prefer in the city because in the city, uh, there are some buildings which are very tall and beautiful, uh, so I can take a lot of picture and, uh, service to, uh, many people which make me happy.

✓ I prefer the city because there are some buildings that are very tall and beautiful, so I can take a lot of pictures and serve many people, which makes me happy.

Use 'the city' to refer to a specific environment (article error). 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' (singular and plural issue). 'Service to many people' is incorrect verb; use 'serve many people' (incorrect use of verbs/structure). 'Which make me happy' must agree with singular subject 'which' referring to the act 'serve many people' or the whole clause; use 'which makes me happy' for correct subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use plural nouns for countable items and ensure verb agrees with its subject.

× I prefer views in other countries because, uh, there are some tall building and skycrapper which uh, my country doesn't have.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because there are some tall buildings and skyscrapers that my country doesn't have.

'Building' and 'skyscrapper' should be plural: 'buildings' and 'skyscrapers' when speaking generally (singular and plural issue). Spelling: 'skyscraper' is correct. Use 'that' instead of a comma and 'which' for a defining relative clause; keep sentence flow. Suggestion: pluralize general countable nouns and check spelling.

× I would like to, uh, I would like to, uh, go hang out and see or go to some, uh, popular restaurant.

✓ I would like to go hang out and visit some popular restaurants.

The original repeats 'I would like to' and uses mixed verbs 'go hang out and see or go to' which is awkward and ungrammatical (sentence structure errors). 'See' is vague; use 'visit' when talking about places or restaurants. Use plural 'restaurants' if speaking generally. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition and coordinate verbs clearly (e.g., 'go hang out and visit').