视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говорите кратко и по существу: начните с прямого ответа на вопрос, затем приведите одно-два конкретных уточняющих подробности. Избегайте фраз типа "I little don't understand" во время ответа — лучше попросить уточнение один раз, а затем ответить уверенно. Работайте над грамматикой (например, "I don't quite understand"; "I like taking pictures of different views") и на связках (for example, because, and).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset because the light makes the buildings look dramatic, and I also like capturing countryside scenes when I travel because they feel peaceful.

建議: Не реагируйте на непонимание критикой экзаменатора. Вместо этого попросите краткое пояснение, если нужно, затем ответьте прямо. Стройте ответ с тематическим предложением и поддерживающей деталью, используя связки (because, however). Попрактикуйте простые грамматические конструкции: "I prefer..." и "because...".

範例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy quiet landscapes and natural scenery. However, I also like urban views sometimes for their lively atmosphere and interesting architecture.

建議: Отвечайте ясно и структурировано: начните с чёткого выбора (own country, other countries, or both) и объясните причину с конкретным примером. Избегайте ошибок в словах и согласовании (например, "I prefer views in my own country and in other countries"), используйте связки (because, for example).

範例: I prefer views both in my own country and in other countries because each place has its own charm. For example, my country has beautiful coastal landscapes, but other countries offer different cultural sights and mountain scenery that I enjoy exploring.

× Actually I little don't understand your question, but I can answer how I think. Yes I like taking picture I think is really cool you know?

✓ Actually I don't really understand your question, but I can answer how I think. Yes, I like taking pictures; I think it's really cool, you know?

The original contains several sentence structure issues: incorrect word order ('I little don't understand'), missing adverb placement ('don't really understand'), missing plural on 'picture', missing commas and a missing subject+verb contraction for 'it is'. Suggestion: place adverbs before main verbs ('don't really understand'), use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally ('pictures'), include commas to separate clauses, and use 'it's' or 'it is' for clarity.

× I really didn't quite what are you talking about? Please can you talking with me a normal, uh, no.

✓ I really didn't quite understand what you were talking about. Please can you speak to me normally?

Errors include incorrect verb forms and word order ('didn't quite what are you talking about'), misuse of 'talking' where base verb 'speak' or 'talk' is needed after 'can you', and inappropriate adverb form 'a normal'. Suggestion: use 'understand' after 'didn't quite', use past continuous 'were talking' to match past context, and use 'speak to me normally' for polite request.

× I prefer wheels in own country and other countries because I think my country very beautiful, but other countries is very beautiful that my country for example.

✓ I prefer views in my own country and in other countries because I think my country is very beautiful, and other countries are also very beautiful compared to my country, for example.

Problems: incorrect noun 'wheels' instead of 'views', missing possessive pronoun 'my', missing articles and verb agreement ('my country very beautiful', 'other countries is'), and awkward comparative phrasing. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('views'), include possessive 'my', include 'is/are' for adjective complement, and use 'compared to' or 'also' to express comparison; ensure subject-verb agreement ('other countries are').