视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy, sentence structure and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "excites" not "enthusiasts"). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers within 3–4 sentences. Also correct verb agreement and article usage.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it excites me and lifts my mood. For example, when I look back at those pictures, they bring back pleasant memories and cheer me up. Also, photographing scenery helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss.

建議: Make a direct topic sentence answering the preference, then provide clear supporting reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement: "areas have"), avoid unfinished sentences, and give at least one specific example or contrast to make the answer concrete.

範例: It depends on my mood; I like both urban and rural views. Urban views appeal to me because of the lively streets and modern architecture, while rural views relax me with wide fields and quiet lanes. For instance, I enjoy city skylines at night but prefer the countryside for weekend walks.

建議: Clarify and correct sentence fragments and vocabulary, be specific and concise. Use linking words to expand reasons (e.g., "because", "for example") and avoid awkward phrasing ("enjoy high"). Mention concrete places and reasons why they appeal to you, and keep answer within 3–4 coherent sentences.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to its landscapes and there are many places I still want to explore. For example, I hope to hike the high mountain trails near Mount Everest to see the dramatic peaks, and visit quiet coastal towns for peaceful sea views. These local trips feel meaningful and familiar to me.

× Yes, I love to take pictures of different views as it enthusiasts me.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views as it excites me.

The verb 'enthuse' is not used correctly here; 'enthuses' is not the correct transitive form for this meaning. More importantly, 'love to take' is acceptable but 'love taking' is more natural with hobbies. 'Excite' or 'enthuse' should be used with the subject that causes the feeling (pictures) and take correct form. Use 'it excites me' to express that taking pictures causes enthusiasm. Also ensure verb form matches the subject and natural collocation.

× It cheer me up, freshens my mood.

✓ It cheers me up and refreshes my mood.

Subject 'it' requires third person singular verbs 'cheers' and 'refreshes'. Also use 'and' to connect the two actions. 'Freshens my mood' is less natural than 'refreshes my mood.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and proper conjunction.

× Whenever I want to look back to those memories, it lifts my mood.

✓ Whenever I look back on those memories, it lifts my mood.

Use 'look back on' (correct preposition) rather than 'look back to.' Present simple 'I look' is more natural for habitual actions than 'I want to look.' Keeping 'it lifts my mood' is fine. Correct preposition and tense make the sentence natural.

× Both the areas has their own view and it depends on my mood whether I want to look at the urban areas or the rural areas.

✓ Both areas have their own views, and it depends on my mood whether I want to look at urban areas or rural areas.

'Both areas' is plural and requires 'have' not 'has'. 'Their own views' should match plurality. Omit definite article 'the' before general 'urban areas'/'rural areas'. Use commas to separate clauses. Maintain plural agreement.

× Urban areas are looking like.

✓ Urban areas have a distinctive look.

'Are looking like' is ungrammatical. Use 'have a distinctive look' or 'look different' to describe appearance. This provides a complete predicate and correct verb choice.

× I prefer the views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to its landscapes and there are still many places I haven't seen or visited.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to its landscapes, and there are still many places I haven't seen or visited.

This sentence is mostly correct; a comma before 'and' improves clarity when linking two independent clauses. No major grammar error matches the provided list beyond punctuation; included for completeness.

× For example, I want to visit the high mountain trails near. Mount Everest and a quiet coastal towns because I enjoy high.

✓ For example, I want to visit the high mountain trails near Mount Everest and quiet coastal towns because I enjoy high altitudes and peaceful places.

The original has fragmented punctuation 'near. Mount Everest' which incorrectly splits the sentence. 'A quiet coastal towns' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' to match plural or change to singular. 'Because I enjoy high' is incomplete; specify 'high altitudes' or 'high places' and add 'peaceful places' to clarify why coastal towns are appealing. Ensure noun number agreement and complete phrases.