视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb forms and prepositions, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I love taking photos of beautiful scenes, especially sunrises and sunsets. For example, I often photograph the sky because the changing colors are very inspiring. Also, I like taking close-ups of flowers since their details make me feel relaxed and at home.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (urban or rural), use correct vocabulary, and give a specific reason with a linking word. Avoid obscure or incorrect words and keep sentences simple and accurate.

範例: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a small village and feel more comfortable there. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields and old houses, since they remind me of my childhood and have more natural beauty than cityscapes.

建議: Give a clear, grammatically correct response stating preference, then provide one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid invented words.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because they feel more familiar and reflect our traditions. For example, photographing local festivals and traditional architecture helps me capture cultural details that I understand better than those in foreign countries.

× Actually I really love to taking a picture about some beautiful things and such as the sunsets or sunrises.

✓ Actually I really love taking pictures of beautiful things, such as sunsets and sunrises.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund 'taking' (not 'to taking'). Use plural 'pictures' for general activity. Use preposition 'of' with 'pictures' and 'such as' to introduce examples. Also remove redundant 'about' and simplify phrasing. Suggestion: Use 'love' + gerund and keep nouns plural when speaking generally.

× I often take take a picture about the sky and sometimes the flowers look so beautiful it makes me feel like relaxed and like help me live at the place.

✓ I often take pictures of the sky, and sometimes the flowers look so beautiful they make me feel relaxed and make me enjoy living here.

Use 'take' + plural 'pictures' for habitual action. Remove duplicate 'take'. Use preposition 'of' with 'pictures'. The clause 'flowers... it makes me' requires plural subject agreement 'they make me'. 'Feel relaxed' does not need 'like'. 'Help me live at the place' is awkward; use 'make me enjoy living here' or 'make me feel at home.' Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct prepositions and gerunds.

× I feel fair with former loyalists because I have been living for a small village since I was born, so I used to like living in the parlous, so I really love to take a picture of some rural areas.

✓ I feel comfortable in rural areas because I have been living in a small village since I was born, so I really love taking pictures of rural scenes.

Prepositions: use 'in' (not 'for') with 'living in a village'. 'Feel fair with former loyalists' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'feel comfortable in rural areas'. 'Used to like' is unnecessary here. Use 'love taking pictures' (gerund) and 'rural scenes' or 'rural areas'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('in a village') and simplify sentences for clarity.

× I prefer my own countries listener because it feels more familiar to me and because our traditional and culture is very different from what country.

✓ I prefer my own country because it feels more familiar to me and because our traditions and culture are very different from those of other countries.

Use singular 'country' (article error and plural confusion). 'Countries listener' is nonsensical; remove 'listener'. Use plural 'traditions' and 'those of other countries' to compare cultures. Suggestion: Be careful with singular/plural nouns and use comparative structure 'different from those of' when comparing with multiple countries.

× So understand other countries tradition or culture is really difficult for me so I just prefer weave for my own country.

✓ So understanding other countries' traditions and cultures is really difficult for me, so I just prefer to stay in my own country.

The sentence needs a gerund 'understanding' as the subject. Use possessive apostrophe 'countries'' for plural possessive. Use plural 'traditions and cultures'. 'Weave' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'stay' or 'live' in my own country. Suggestion: Use gerund subjects, correct possessive forms, and choose appropriate verbs like 'stay' or 'live'.