视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise: give a direct topic sentence saying whether you like taking photos, then explain why with one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, then). Use clearer vocabulary for feelings and impressions (e.g., ‘emotion’, ‘memories’, ‘perspective’). Keep to at most 3–4 short sentences and use a linking word when adding a reason (because/so).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture unique emotions and memories. For example, a seaside sunset makes me feel calm, while cityscapes remind me of busy life. So I often photograph places to remember how they made me feel.

建議: Answer directly (state a clear preference) and give specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar for location terms (urban/rural, inside/outside the city). Avoid contradictions: if you prefer rural views, explain why concisely (e.g., peace, nature, less noise). Limit to 2–3 sentences and include examples or comparisons to make your point stronger.

範例: I prefer rural views because I find the countryside more peaceful and relaxing. For instance, there is less traffic and more green space, so I feel comfortable and can enjoy nature. In contrast, urban areas are noisy and crowded.

建議: Give a clear, grammatical response stating your preference, then support it with specific reasons and avoid confusing phrases. If you like your country more, explain why (familiarity, culture, scenery). If you also like other countries, mention one example and link it (however/however). Keep sentences short and coherent, and avoid unclear fragments like ‘A river I always need my country to use’.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to its culture and landscapes. For example, local festivals and familiar scenery make me feel at home. However, I also enjoy visiting countries like Japan because their architecture and gardens are beautiful.

× Yes, I like to take a picture of different view because I can't get more feelings about picture and then I think I can get uh other from picture because I can't get anything from different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I can't get many feelings from a picture, and I think I can get other impressions from pictures.

Use the gerund 'taking' after 'like' rather than the infinitive 'to take' for habitual preferences (Grammar Problem Type 8). Use plural 'pictures' and 'views' to match the general idea (singular/plural). Replace 'get more feelings about picture' with 'get many feelings from a picture' for correct preposition and quantifier usage. Use 'impressions' to convey the intended meaning more naturally.

× Yes, I like to take a picture of different view because I can't get more feelings about picture and then I think I can get uh other from picture because I can't get anything from different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I can't get many feelings from a picture, and I think I can get other impressions from pictures.

Replace 'about' with 'from' to indicate source of feelings (Grammar Problem Type 11). Use 'from pictures' consistently. Also change 'of different view' to 'of different views' to match plural meaning.

× Yes, I like to take a picture of different view because I can't get more feelings about picture and then I think I can get uh other from picture because I can't get anything from different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I can't get many feelings from a picture, and I think I can get other impressions from pictures.

Use plural nouns 'pictures' and 'views' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1). Use 'a picture' only when referring to a single specific image; here the speaker means pictures in general.

× I prefer you in this area because I always am inside the city. I never go to outside city but if I go to rural area I can get more comfortable because intern city is more uncomfortable because everybody.

✓ I prefer the countryside because I am usually in the city. I never go outside the city, but if I go to a rural area I can feel more comfortable because inner-city life is less comfortable due to the crowds.

Correct present tense and habitual aspect: use 'I am usually' instead of 'I always am' and 'I never go outside the city' (Grammar Problem Type 6). Clarify 'prefer you in this area' to 'prefer the countryside' for meaning. 'Can get more comfortable' revised to 'can feel more comfortable'. 'Intern city' corrected to 'inner-city' and explain cause 'due to the crowds'.

× I prefer you in this area because I always am inside the city.

✓ I prefer the countryside because I am usually in the city.

'You' is incorrect here; the speaker meant a place, not a person (Grammar Problem Type 12). Change to 'the countryside' and improve word order to 'I am usually in the city'.

× I never go to outside city but if I go to rural area I can get more comfortable because intern city is more uncomfortable because everybody.

✓ I never go outside the city, but if I go to a rural area I can feel more comfortable because inner-city life is more uncomfortable due to the crowds.

Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'outside the city' (Grammar Problem Type 11). Use 'feel comfortable' rather than 'get comfortable'. Insert 'a' before 'rural area'. 'Intern city' is a misspelling of 'inner-city'.

× Definitely, I prefer to be in my country because I love my country, but I also love other country.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to be in my country because I love it, but I also love other countries.

Use pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition and pluralize 'other country' to 'other countries' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1).

× A river I always need my country to use because I think Japan is the most beautiful country and my country have own.

✓ I always need my country because I think Japan is the most beautiful country and my country has its own beauty.

Sentence is unclear; replace 'A river I always need my country to use' with 'I always need my country' for intended meaning and correct verb agreement 'has' and possessive 'its own beauty' (Grammar Problem Type 14 and 27). 'Have own' is incorrect; use 'has its own'.

× my country have own.

✓ my country has its own beauty.

Use singular verb 'has' with singular noun 'country' (Grammar Problem Type 27). Add 'its' and a noun 'beauty' to complete the idea.