视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và trật tự từ; trả lời nên rõ ràng có câu chủ đề và thêm chi tiết cụ thể; tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (ví dụ: 'however', 'because'). Ngoài ra, giữ độ dài câu tối đa 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp như 'photos', 'capture', 'edit' thay cho 'picture' lặp lại.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often take pictures while travelling around my town because I like capturing everyday scenes. However, my photos do not look as polished as those I see online, so I don’t try to sell them. I mainly keep them for personal memories and to practise my photography skills.

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ thì và số ít/ nhiều), cải thiện từ vựng mô tả và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý. Cụ thể, dùng danh từ chính xác ('landscapes', 'fields') và cấu trúc rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Tránh lỗi như 'it have' và từ thừa 'and some'.

範例: I prefer rural landscapes because they have more natural features such as trees, grass and open fields. Therefore, I can capture a variety of scenes, from misty mornings to colourful sunsets. These changing conditions give me more opportunities to practise different photography techniques.

建議: Cải thiện cách dùng từ (countries → country), ngữ pháp (thì, mạo từ, cấu trúc 'before going abroad'), và làm rõ ý chính. Nên nêu chủ đề rõ ràng, đưa lý do cụ thể và ví dụ. Tránh các câu mơ hồ như 'recover all the beauty'.

範例: I prefer photographing views in my own country. Vietnam has many iconic landscapes and a rich culture, so I want to capture its beauty while I can. For example, I like photographing coastal villages and terraced rice fields before I travel abroad.

× I really like taking picture of different views.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to taking multiple photos in general. Use plural for countable nouns when speaking about them in a general, non-specific sense: 'taking pictures'. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' when you mean more than one or the activity of taking photos.

× When I cut them on the way I go everywhere.

✓ When I come across them on my way, I take pictures everywhere I go.

The original sentence uses incorrect verbs and unclear structure: 'cut them' is incorrect collocation and 'on the way I go everywhere' is ungrammatical. The corrected version uses 'come across' to mean 'encounter' and separates ideas: encountering views and taking photos while traveling. Suggestion: Use clear verb phrases (come across / encounter) and reorder the sentence to show cause and result.

× However, my picture often did not beautifully cool like the online picture, so I do not sell them anywhere.

✓ However, my pictures often do not look as beautiful or cool as the pictures online, so I do not sell them anywhere.

Mixed and incorrect tenses: 'did not' is past when describing a habitual present issue; use present simple 'do not'. Also noun number and word order: 'picture' should be 'pictures'; 'look as beautiful or cool as' is the correct comparative structure. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual situations and compare with 'as ... as'.

× I prefer the views in rural areas because it have more natural items like trees, grass and some and the field.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have more natural features like trees, grass and fields.

Incorrect pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to match plural 'views' (subject-verb agreement). 'Items' is unnatural here; 'features' or 'things' is better. 'Some and the field' is ungrammatical; use 'fields' plural. Also verb 'have' must agree with plural subject. Suggestion: Match pronouns and verbs to plural nouns and use appropriate nouns like 'features' or 'fields'.

× So I can take many different picture from the morning to the sunset.

✓ So I can take many different pictures from morning to sunset.

Use plural 'pictures' for multiple photos. Omit 'the' before 'morning' and 'sunset' when speaking generally: 'from morning to sunset'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns and remove unnecessary definite articles in general time expressions.

× I prefer the things in my own countries.

✓ I prefer the things in my own country.

'Countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to the speaker's own nation. 'Things' is vague but acceptable; 'places' or 'aspects' could be clearer. Suggestion: Use singular 'country' to refer to your own nation.

× You know that Vietnam is famous for traveling and mainly foreign people come here.

✓ You know that Vietnam is famous as a travel destination and mainly foreign tourists come here.

'Famous for traveling' is awkward; use 'famous as a travel destination' or 'for tourism'. 'Foreign people' is unnatural; 'foreign tourists' or 'people from other countries' is better. Suggestion: Use collocations like 'travel destination' and 'foreign tourists' for clarity.

× So I will take my chance to recover all the beauty of my country before go abroad.

✓ So I will take the chance to show off all the beauty of my country before I go abroad.

'Take my chance' is acceptable but 'take the chance' is more natural. 'Recover' is incorrect meaning; use 'show' or 'capture' (if photos). Also 'before go abroad' needs the subject 'I' and correct verb form: 'before I go abroad'. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs ('capture' for photos, 'show' for presenting) and include the subject in the clause after 'before'.