视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trôi chảy: sửa lỗi động từ (ví dụ: “I am interested” hoặc “I really enjoy”), tránh lặp từ và tiếng trì hoãn (“uh”), và giữ câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất hoặc loại cảnh bạn thích để làm câu tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I do. I’m really interested in nature and photography, so I often visit beaches and mountains to take landscape photos. For example, I usually go to the coast once a month to capture sunrise scenes.

建議: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc: dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: “rural areas are more beautiful and peaceful”), tránh dùng từ sai ngữ cảnh như “acquired”. Nên phát triển câu với một lý do rõ ràng và một ví dụ ngắn để đáp án thuyết phục hơn.

範例: I prefer rural areas because they are more peaceful and beautiful. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet rice fields where the light is softer and there are fewer people.

建議: Chú ý ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và danh từ đếm/không đếm: dùng “I prefer” not “I refer”; “Vietnamese scenery is very beautiful and diverse”; ‘long sand’ → ‘long sandy beaches’. Tăng tính cụ thể bằng cách nêu một địa điểm và một lý do ngắn gọn. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu rõ ràng.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has very diverse scenery. For example, Da Nang has long sandy beaches while Sapa offers dramatic mountain landscapes, so I can photograph many different scenes without traveling far.

× Yes, I do. I really, uh, interested in uh, nature and photography.

✓ Yes, I do. I am really interested in nature and photography.

The student omitted the auxiliary verb 'am' required with the adjective 'interested' to form the correct present state 'am interested'. Use 'be' + adjective to describe feelings or states. Suggestion: say 'I am interested in...' or 'I'm really interested in...'.

× So I usually go to the beach or go to the mountain to take the beach to take pictures.

✓ So I usually go to the beach or to the mountains to take pictures.

The sentence repeats phrases and has incorrect singular/plural and structure. 'Go to the mountain' is less natural than 'go to the mountains', and the redundant 'to take the beach to take pictures' should be removed. Suggestion: simplify to 'I usually go to the beach or to the mountains to take pictures.'

× I prefer a rural area because it's a beautiful and acquired.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are beautiful and peaceful.

The original uses 'a rural area' then 'it's' and 'acquired' which is incorrect word choice. 'Acquired' is wrong; likely intended 'quiet' or 'peaceful'. Also number agreement: 'areas' matches the general preference. Suggestion: use 'I prefer rural areas because they are beautiful and peaceful.'

× I refer this in my own country because I think that Vietnam scenery is really beautiful and really variety.

✓ I prefer this in my own country because I think Vietnam's scenery is really beautiful and very varied.

Several issues: 'refer' is wrong verb; should be 'prefer'. 'This' is okay but 'prefer this in my own country' is fine. 'Vietnam scenery' needs possessive 'Vietnam's scenery'. 'Really variety' is incorrect; 'variety' is a noun and needs an adjective 'varied' or adverb 'very varied'. Suggestion: use 'I prefer this in my own country because I think Vietnam's scenery is really beautiful and very varied.'

× It combined between mountains and also the beaches with a very beautiful and long sand.

✓ It combines mountains and beaches with very beautiful long stretches of sand.

Tense and structure: 'combined' should be 'combines' to describe a general fact (present simple). 'Combined between' is incorrect; use 'combines'. 'the beaches' is okay but 'a very beautiful and long sand' is ungrammatical—'sand' here needs 'stretches of sand' or 'long sandy beaches'. Suggestion: 'It combines mountains and beaches with very beautiful, long stretches of sand.'

× So I think that Vietnamese is the most beautiful country.

✓ So I think that Vietnam is the most beautiful country.

'Vietnamese' is an adjective or demonym referring to people or language; the country name should be 'Vietnam'. Use 'Vietnam' when naming the country. Suggestion: say 'Vietnam is the most beautiful country.'