视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct verb forms. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences, add one specific detail (what you enjoy photographing) and a linking word if expanding. For example, correct verb forms, remove repeated phrases, and give a specific reason or example of a view you like.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. I especially like capturing coastal scenes because the changing light at sunrise creates striking colors, so I often visit the beach early in the morning to get unique shots.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, use correct vocabulary (e.g., "buildings" not "bills"), and give one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it concise and grammatically correct, and avoid unclear phrases like "let me lovely."

範例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the architecture and busy streets. For example, at night the illuminated buildings and streetlights create an interesting atmosphere that I like to photograph.

建議: State your preference clearly and correct unclear words (e.g., "Blues" unclear). Provide a specific reason and one brief example of a place that makes you proud, using a linking word to connect ideas. Use 2–3 well-formed sentences.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel proud of its landscapes and culture. For instance, the mountain parks near my hometown are peaceful and familiar, so I enjoy photographing them when I travel locally.

× It's make me feel hobby for me.

✓ It makes me feel happy/I enjoy it.

Error type: subject-verb agreement and word choice (plural/singular and wrong noun). 'It' is third person singular so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). 'Hobby' is a noun meaning an activity; the student likely meant an adjective describing feeling, such as 'happy' or 'I enjoy it.' Suggest using 'It makes me feel happy' or 'I enjoy it.' (Note: Primary issue IDs applicable: 2 (Third person singular issue) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× I like to taking pictures of different places.

✓ I like taking pictures of different places.

Error type: incorrect verb form after 'like'. After verbs such as 'like', use the gerund (verb + -ing) or the infinitive, but not both. 'To taking' is incorrect; choose 'like taking' or 'like to take.' Suggest 'I like taking pictures of different places.' (Applicable ID: 8 Verb + -ing form).

× I'd like different lighting.

✓ I like different lighting.

Error type: incorrect contraction and word choice. 'I'd like' usually means 'I would like' (a preference or polite request) which is odd here without an object. The student likely means a general preference: 'I like different lighting.' This fixes mood to a simple present statement. (Applicable ID: 6 Present tense issue / 26 Sentence structure errors).

× Absolutely, I do prefer bills in my urban areas because the urban areas are so beautiful as a road line.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer buildings in urban areas because the city streets are so beautiful.

Errors: 'bills' is wrong word; the student meant 'buildings' (vocabulary). 'In my urban areas' is unnatural; use 'in urban areas' or 'in my city.' 'As a road line' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'the streets' or 'the city streets.' Also remove unnecessary 'do' unless for emphasis. Suggest: 'I prefer buildings in urban areas because the city streets are so beautiful.' (Applicable IDs: 1 Singular and plural issue, 11 Incorrect use of prepositions, 26 Sentence structure errors).

× At the night let me lovely.

✓ At night I find them lovely./I find the night lovely.

Errors: 'At the night' should be 'At night' (article error). 'Let me lovely' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'I find them lovely' or 'I find the night lovely.' Correct to 'At night I find them lovely.' This fixes article and sentence structure. (Applicable IDs: 17 Incorrect use of the definite article, 26 Sentence structure errors).

× In my own, I prefer Blues in my country because my country is beautiful.

✓ In my own country, I prefer places in my country because it is beautiful./In my own country, I prefer the scenery because my country is beautiful.

Errors: 'In my own' is incomplete; should be 'In my own country.' 'Blues' is incorrect vocabulary—perhaps 'views' or 'scenery' was intended. Repetition 'in my country because my country' is redundant; replace second instance with 'it.' Suggest: 'In my own country, I prefer the scenery because it is beautiful.' (Applicable IDs: 11 Incorrect use of prepositions, 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, 12 Incorrect use of pronouns).

× There are many places the places makes me proud or comfortable.

✓ There are many places that make me proud or comfortable./There are many places which make me feel proud and comfortable.

Errors: run-on/unlinked clauses and subject-verb agreement. 'The places makes' is wrong: plural subject 'places' requires 'make' (not 'makes'). Also repetition 'places the places' should be connected with a relative pronoun: 'places that make...' Suggest: 'There are many places that make me proud or comfortable.' (Applicable IDs: 27 Subject-verb agreement errors, 26 Sentence structure errors).

× That's why.

✓ That's why I prefer them./That's why I feel proud.

Error type: sentence fragment/ellipsis. 'That's why.' is a dependent phrase and sounds incomplete in this context. Provide the reason's target: 'That's why I prefer them.' or 'That's why I feel proud.' This makes the sentence complete. (Applicable ID: 23 Sentence without a verb / 26 Sentence structure errors).