视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and conveys enthusiasm, but has several fluency and pronunciation hesitations ('uh', 'news' instead of 'yes'), slight grammar issues and repetition. To improve: (1) Correct the opening word to 'Yes' and avoid filler words; (2) Use a clear topic sentence plus one or two concise supporting points; (3) Vary vocabulary (e.g. 'capture', 'record', 'memorable moments'); (4) Keep it within 3–4 sentences and link ideas with short connectors such as 'because' and 'and'. Practice speaking full sentences without fillers and rehearse one polished 3–4 sentence answer.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me capture everyday life and record memorable moments. For example, I often photograph city streets and family gatherings to remember the atmosphere. So photography is a simple way for me to keep special memories.

建議: Good choice and clear preference, with specific reason (natural landscapes, lake). Improve accuracy and fluency: (1) Fix grammar: 'I prefer' not 'I'm prefer'; (2) Remove fillers and finish sentences fully; (3) Use linking words for smoother flow (e.g. 'because', 'so'); (4) Add one concrete detail or example (what you see or feel) to make answer more specific. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy natural landscapes, especially lakes. I like walking along the shore to feel the breeze and watch birds. This peaceful atmosphere helps me relax after a busy week.

建議: The idea is clear but the response has hesitations, grammar slips and is slightly repetitive. To improve: (1) Use correct tense and phrasing ('I haven't traveled to many countries'); (2) Reduce fillers and repetition ('my, uh, my'); (3) Provide one specific example of a landscape in your country to support your point; (4) Use linking words like 'but' and 'for example' to structure the answer.

範例: I haven't traveled to many countries, so I prefer views in my own country. It's very large and has diverse landscapes — for example, I can visit mountains, lakes and historical towns without going abroad. That variety keeps me interested in exploring locally.

× News of course, I'm keen on taking photos because it can, uh help me capture my daily life and also record the meaningful moment.

✓ No, of course. I'm keen on taking photos because they can help me capture my daily life and also record meaningful moments.

The speaker used 'News' mistakenly and mixed singular/plural and article use: 'News' should be 'No' (sentence structure error). 'It can help me' is incorrect because 'photos' is plural, so use 'they can'. 'The meaningful moment' is unnatural; use plural 'meaningful moments' or omit the article. Suggestion: say 'No, of course' to answer the question, match pronouns to plural nouns ('photos' -> 'they'), and use plural or uncountable nouns appropriately. Suggested practice: replace filler words, check subject-pronoun agreement, and prefer plural for general repeated experiences.

× Uh, so I really love it and also it's uh uh.

✓ I really love it, and it's very relaxing.

The original is fragmented with fillers and unclear reference. 'It's' is fine as third person singular, but the sentence lacks completion and contains excessive fillers (sentence structure issue). Correction completes the idea with a proper predicate. Suggestion: avoid fillers and provide a clear verb phrase after 'it's'. Use a descriptive adjective or clause to finish the thought.

× Well, I'm prefer rural areas because I like the natural landscapes, especially the lake.

✓ Well, I prefer rural areas because I like natural landscapes, especially lakes.

The original 'I'm prefer' mixes auxiliary 'am' with base verb 'prefer' which is ungrammatical (subject-verb agreement/auxiliary misuse). Remove 'am' to form simple present 'I prefer'. Also 'the lake' is too specific; use plural 'lakes' or 'the lake there' if referring to a particular one. Suggestion: use simple present for general preferences: 'I prefer'. Use plural nouns for general likes: 'natural landscapes' or 'lakes'.

× I really love to, uh, walking along the lake so I can enjoy the wind, enjoy the breeze and.

✓ I really love walking along the lake so I can enjoy the wind and the breeze.

After 'love', both infinitive 'to walk' or gerund 'walking' are possible, but the sentence mixed 'to' with gerund 'walking' which is incorrect. Remove 'to' when using the gerund: 'love walking'. Also finish the list properly: 'enjoy the wind and the breeze.' Suggestion: choose either 'I really love to walk...' or 'I really love walking...' and avoid trailing conjunctions.

× Actually, I didn't travel too much, too many countries, but I still enjoy my, uh, my country's landscape because my country is so huge, so I can see so much different, uh, landscape.

✓ Actually, I haven't traveled to many countries, but I still enjoy my country's landscapes because my country is so huge that I can see many different landscapes.

The original used simple past 'I didn't travel too much' which sounds odd for life experience; present perfect 'haven't traveled' is better. 'Too many countries' is ungrammatical here; use 'to many countries'. 'So much different, uh, landscape' mixes 'much' with countable 'landscape' and pluralization. Use 'many different landscapes' or 'a lot of different scenery'. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences up to now ('haven't traveled'), use 'to' with 'travel', and match countable/plural nouns with 'many'.