视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Good natural response and direct. To improve, make the answer more concise and specific: state briefly why you take photos, give one concrete example, and use a linking word to connect reasons. Avoid repetition of “view” and the phrase “what I must have missed”.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes because they help me notice details I missed at first. For example, when I photograph a market, I often spot colourful textiles and interesting street food stalls that I wouldn’t have seen otherwise.

建議: Content is relevant but a little long and slightly repetitive. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting points connected with linking words (e.g., “because” and “also”). Mention a concrete example of an urban feature you like.

範例: I prefer urban views because the buildings often have interesting architectural details, and the streets are well maintained. For instance, I like photographing the old colonial buildings downtown and the modern glass towers nearby.

建議: Answer is clear and relevant but could be more natural with corrected grammar (“other countries”) and a specific example. Use a linking word like “and” or “besides” to join reasons, and briefly mention a memorable place you’ve seen or want to visit.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unique architecture and different cultural scenes. For example, I enjoyed photographing the colourful houses and street life in Lisbon when I visited, which felt very different from what I see at home.

× I prefer views in other country because I get to see the unique architectural features of the buildings there and also explore various cultures of the citizens in that country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I get to see the unique architectural features of the buildings there and also explore the various cultures of the people in those countries.

The student used singular 'country' after 'other' which requires plural 'countries' when speaking generally about places other than their own. Also 'citizens in that country' is awkward when referring generally; use 'people' and plural 'those countries' to match 'other countries'. Suggestion: say 'other countries' when referring to places in general and use 'people' or 'residents' instead of 'citizens' for a natural general statement.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it gives me a clearer view of what I must have missed the first time.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they give me a clearer idea of what I may have missed the first time.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural 'pictures of different views'; use 'they' to refer back to 'pictures' (subject-verb agreement/number). Also 'gives me a clearer view' is acceptable but 'give me a clearer idea' is more natural. 'Must have missed' expresses certainty about a past action; 'may have missed' is more appropriate when suggesting possibility. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match plural/singular nouns and choose modal verbs that match intended certainty.

× I prefer views in urban areas because there are several buildings with special architectural features and the roads are very well maintained and also there are resort centers that are very attractive.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because there are several buildings with special architectural features, the roads are very well maintained, and there are also attractive resort centres.

The original sentence uses 'and also there are' which is grammatically acceptable but word order is awkward. Moving 'also' before the verb and combining clauses with commas improves flow. 'Resort centers that are very attractive' is wordy; 'attractive resort centres' is concise. Suggestion: place conjunctions and adverbs for smoother sentence rhythm: '..., and there are also ...'. Use consistent variety: 'centres' or 'centers' depending on chosen variant.