视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but has several issues: unclear phrasing, pronunciation problems, grammar errors, repetition and lack of a clear topic sentence with coherent supporting details. To improve, start with a clear direct sentence (e.g. “No, I don’t usually take photos of views.”). Then give one or two concise specific reasons using linking words (e.g. “because” / “so”), correct grammar (use present tense and singular/plural forms), and avoid repeating fragments. Also clarify the privacy concern more precisely and correct pronunciation of words like “hesitant” and “privacy.” Keep the whole response within 2–4 sentences.

範例: No, I don’t usually take photos of views because I feel uncomfortable doing it in crowded places. For example, I worry about invading people’s privacy, so I avoid taking pictures where others might appear in the background.

建議: This answer is on the right track: you give a preference and reasons. Improve clarity and grammar: begin with a clear topic sentence (“I prefer urban views.”), use correct forms (“there are many large buildings”), and combine ideas with linking words (“because”, “for example”, “so”). Be more specific about what you find attractive (architectural style, skyline at night) and avoid redundant adjectives like “very beautiful” twice. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because there are many large and interesting buildings. For example, the skyline from a rooftop looks impressive, and photos taken from higher ground often show clearer details and dramatic perspectives.

建議: The idea is clear but the answer has repetition, grammar mistakes, and vague statements. Start with a direct topic sentence (“I prefer views in other countries.”). Then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (“because”, “for example”), avoid overgeneralizing (“everywhere”), and correct verb forms (“I prefer taking pictures of views in other countries”). If possible, add a positive example of a place abroad you like. Keep it concise and coherent.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because many foreign cities are cleaner and have more varied architecture. For example, I enjoyed photographing the waterfront in Lisbon, where the streets were tidy and the buildings had colorful facades.

× No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I was very hesitate in the P in the sounding when I was when there was very crowded place.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I am very hesitant about the 'P' sound when I am in a very crowded place.

The student mixed past and present tenses and used incorrect adjective form. 'Was very hesitate' is incorrect: use present tense 'am' to match 'I don't like' and the correct adjective 'hesitant'. 'In the P in the sounding' is unclear; clarify as 'about the "P" sound'. Use 'in a very crowded place' (add article). Maintain consistent present tense.

× So if I take the picture there it is.

✓ So if I take a picture there, it might be intrusive.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Take the picture there it is' lacks a main verb and logical object. Use 'take a picture there' and add a clause explaining consequences, e.g. 'it might be intrusive' to complete the thought.

× It's up to someone privacy and I also.

✓ It invades someone's privacy, and I feel uncomfortable about that too.

'It's up to someone privacy' is grammatically incorrect and uses wrong pronoun structure. Use 'invades someone's privacy' to convey the idea. 'I also' is incomplete—change to 'I feel uncomfortable about that too' to complete the sentence.

× I prefer views in urban areas because there is a very large building.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because there are many large buildings.

Singular 'a very large building' conflicts with general preference; use plural 'many large buildings' and correct verb agreement 'there are'. This matches present tense preference.

× The views of buildings are very beautiful and if you taking pictures from the upper ground so the picture is very clear and beautiful.

✓ The views of the buildings are very beautiful, and if you take pictures from higher ground, the photos are clearer and more beautiful.

'You taking' should be 'you take' (simple present). 'Upper ground' is not natural; use 'higher ground'. Use plural 'photos' and comparative 'clearer' and 'more beautiful' for correct adjective forms.

× I prefer views in other countries because in my country there is very crowded places everywhere and there's very there's garbage at every place and but in some places there is good.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in my country there are very crowded places everywhere, and there is a lot of garbage in many areas, although some places are nice.

Mix of singular/plural and awkward phrasing. Use 'there are very crowded places' for plural, 'a lot of garbage' instead of repeating 'there's very', and 'some places are nice' to convey the positive exception. Keep present tense.

× But I prefer to taking pictures prefer views on on other.

✓ But I prefer taking pictures of views in other countries.

'Prefer to taking' mixes infinitive and -ing form; use either 'prefer to take' or 'prefer taking'. Also remove duplicate 'prefer' and fix 'on on other' to 'in other countries'. Use consistent structure 'prefer taking pictures of views in other countries'.