视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and expand briefly with reasons and one specific detail. Use a clear topic sentence, a linking word, and a short supporting detail or example. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Not really. I don't often take photos of scenery because I enjoy relaxing at home; for example, I prefer reading or watching films on my balcony rather than going out to take pictures.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, then use a linking word to give a clear reason and a specific detail. Correct grammar (remove 'simply' or place it properly) and be concise.

範例: I prefer rural views. Because I live in the north, the countryside offers landscapes I rarely see in my town, such as wide fields and traditional farms, which I find peaceful and refreshing.

建議: Clarify your meaning with a direct topic sentence and fix grammar. If you cannot travel, say so and explain why or give a preference hypothetically. Use one or two supporting details and a linking word.

範例: I would prefer views in other countries if I could visit them. However, I haven't had the chance to travel abroad, so I mostly enjoy local scenery and hope to see foreign landscapes in the future.

× No, I'm not a big fan of taking pictures of different scenery. I prefer just staying at home.

✓ No, I'm not a big fan of taking pictures of different sceneries. I prefer to just stay at home.

The word 'scenery' is usually uncountable when referring to a view in general, but the student means different kinds of views, so 'sceneries' (plural countable) or better 'different scenes/views' fits. Also 'prefer just staying' is less natural; use 'prefer to just stay' or 'prefer just to stay' to match the present tense preference construction 'prefer to + base verb'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer to just stay at home' or 'I prefer staying at home.'

× I'd say I prefer views in rural areas because simply I'm living in northern area and rural areas views are totally different from what I see.

✓ I'd say I prefer views in rural areas because I simply live in the northern area, and rural views are totally different from what I see.

Problems: word order and preposition/ article usage. 'simply I'm living' has awkward order; use 'I simply live' or 'I'm simply living' depending on meaning. 'in northern area' needs the definite article: 'in the northern area' or 'in the north'. Also 'rural areas views' should be 'rural views' or 'views in rural areas' to show correct noun modifier order. Suggestion: 'I simply live in the north, and rural views are totally different from what I see.'

× I prefer using other countries that I'm. I have no chance to visit other countries.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, but I haven't had the chance to visit other countries.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb usage: 'I prefer using other countries that I'm' is ungrammatical. The student likely means they prefer views from other countries. Use 'I prefer views in other countries.' The second sentence mixes tense and lacks auxiliary: 'I have no chance to visit other countries' is better in present perfect if referring to experience: 'I haven't had the chance to visit other countries.' Suggestion: 'I prefer views in other countries, but I haven't had the chance to visit them.'