视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammatical errors, and give one specific, well-organized example. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like landscape shots when I go hiking at sunset because the light makes colors richer and shadows more dramatic. For example, last month I photographed a ridge behind a lone tree beside a fence, and the composition and golden light made the picture very striking.

建議: Answer directly then compare clearly with specific details. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'. Provide concrete examples of what you like about each setting.

範例: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. In cities, I enjoy how light transforms skyscrapers at different times of day, such as the warm glow on glass in the early morning. On the other hand, rural areas offer natural textures and open spaces, like fields and trees, that create peaceful, textured compositions.

建議: Give a clear, direct opinion and support it with specific reasons and a concise example. Avoid hesitations and filler phrases; organize points with linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: It doesn't matter whether I photograph views at home or abroad because what matters is the composition and light. For instance, a well-lit street with interesting architecture can be beautiful anywhere, so I focus on angles and timing rather than the country.

× I really enjoy the taking photos.

✓ I really enjoy taking photos.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed directly by a gerund without an article. 'the' before 'taking' is unnecessary and incorrect. Remove 'the' to use the correct verb + -ing structure: 'enjoy taking photos.'

× Very beautiful landscaping.

✓ The landscaping is very beautiful.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. To make a complete sentence, add a subject and linking verb: 'The landscaping is very beautiful.' This fits the context and tense.

× especially under sun setting timing,

✓ especially at sunset,

The phrase 'under sun setting timing' is ungrammatical and awkward. Use the common prepositional phrase 'at sunset' to indicate the time when the sun is setting.

× I normally take a lot of photos behind the tree in front of the the in front of the fence because I would like to.

✓ I normally take a lot of photos behind the tree in front of the fence because I like to.

There is repetition 'the the in front of the' and an unnecessary 'would' in 'would like to' which sounds unfinished. Remove duplicate words, keep one prepositional phrase 'in front of the fence,' and use 'because I like to' to express habit. Also ensure prepositions correctly describe location: 'behind the tree in front of the fence.'

× I think both has a very beautiful characteristics.

✓ I think both have very beautiful characteristics.

The subject 'both' is plural and requires the plural verb 'have.' Also 'characteristics' is plural so 'a' should be removed. Use 'both have very beautiful characteristics.'

× So let's say for example in the urban areas you can always see the whole pictures changing during the different times of the day.

✓ So, let's say, for example, in urban areas you can always see the whole scene change at different times of the day.

'The urban areas' and 'the different times' are acceptable but unnecessary articles make the sentence wordy. 'Pictures' is odd here; 'scene' fits better. Use 'change' (bare infinitive) after 'see' to express perception. 'At different times' is the usual expression for times of day.

× For example in the early morning the skyscraper looks astounding because of the sunlight and in the rural areas because of the natural resources which make the picture much more.

✓ For example, in the early morning the skyscraper looks astounding because of the sunlight, and in rural areas the natural scenery makes the picture much more striking.

The original is a run-on and ends abruptly with 'much more.' Complete the comparison by specifying 'much more striking' or similar. Replace 'natural resources' with 'natural scenery' to refer to visual elements, and add parallel structure for clarity.

× I think there's nothing to do with the what countries you take the picture for.

✓ I think it doesn't matter which country you take the picture in.

'There's nothing to do with' is incorrect. Use 'it doesn't matter' to express irrelevance. Use 'which country' and the correct preposition 'in' for taking a picture in a country. Remove extra 'the'.

× I think what is it? What is really to do with it?

✓ I think what's really important is how you find beautiful structures, lighting, and objects to photograph.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Rephrase into a single clear sentence that conveys the intended meaning: focus on what matters ('what's really important') and specify the elements ('structures, lighting, and objects').

× It's it's all about how you find the beautiful structures, lighting and also the objects that you want to do the photo shooting.

✓ It's all about how you find beautiful structures, lighting, and objects that you want to photograph.

Remove the repeated 'it's' and unnecessary 'the' before plural nouns. 'Do the photo shooting' is awkward; use the verb 'photograph.' Make the list parallel and concise.

× For example, in the city area, skyscrapers could be very beautiful. Go along with the.

✓ For example, in the city area, skyscrapers can be very beautiful and create interesting compositions.

The second fragment 'Go along with the.' is incomplete. Combine into a full sentence explaining how skyscrapers contribute to photography. Use 'can be' for general truth and complete the idea with 'create interesting compositions.'