视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, correct basic grammar (singular/plural, articles), avoid fillers (uh), and use linking words to organise details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting examples (with brief reasons) and finish with a short concluding phrase. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes. If something catches my eye, I often photograph people, animals, or striking skies because they tell a story. I also focus on small details like patterns or textures that others usually miss, which makes my photos more unique.

建議: Improve grammar and cohesion: use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and one example. Avoid repeating vague words like "really" and ensure verbs agree. Use linking words (because, although, however) to show contrast when you mention both preferences.

範例: I prefer urban areas because they offer diverse subjects such as street art, bustling markets, and interesting architecture. For example, I often photograph colorful murals and candid moments of people, which I rarely find in rural settings. However, I also enjoy occasional nature shots for variety.

建議: Avoid hesitations and repetition; make one clear point then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "traveling", "discovering new places") and correct grammar (remove duplicate words, fix sentence endings). Balance your answer with a brief acknowledgement of positives at home to sound more natural.

範例: I prefer photographing scenes in other countries because traveling lets me discover unique cultures, architecture, and landscapes that inspire fresh ideas. For instance, I once photographed a traditional market abroad where the colors and activities were unlike anything at home. That said, I still enjoy some local spots for convenience and familiarity.

× I really like taking picture of different views.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural because 'taking' implies making multiple photos in general. Use 'pictures' for countable nouns when speaking about them in general contexts. Suggestion: Use plural form 'pictures' when referring to multiple or general instances.

× For instance, uh, if something caught my eye, I would take picture of the people, uh, regard regardless it was a people or animals or just sky or the clouds.

✓ For instance, if something catches my eye, I would take pictures of the people, whether they were people or animals or just the sky or the clouds.

Multiple issues apply but only present participle form correction is allowed: 'caught' is past tense while context suggests a general conditional, so 'catches' (present) is appropriate; 'take picture' needs plural 'pictures' (handled here); 'regard regardless' is incorrect and replaced with 'whether'. Also added 'the' before 'sky' and 'clouds' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use 'catches' for general present conditions and plural 'pictures' when referring to multiple photos; replace awkward phrases like 'regard regardless' with 'whether'.

× Of course, I really like taking some details that nobody actually taking photos.

✓ Of course, I really like taking photos of details that nobody is actually taking pictures of.

The original has incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Taking some details' is unnatural; we say 'taking photos of details.' Also 'nobody actually taking photos' lacks auxiliary and proper structure; use 'nobody is actually taking pictures of.' Suggestion: Use 'taking photos of details' and include the auxiliary 'is' for continuous tense.

× I mostly prefer urban areas because I constantly really being there and I find really awesome and really interesting to take photos, like really cute or awesome things that are not available in rural areas.

✓ I mostly prefer urban areas because I am constantly there and I find it really awesome and interesting to take photos of cute or unique things that are not available in rural areas.

'Being' was incorrectly used; the correct present-tense form with 'I' is 'I am constantly there.' Also added 'it' as a dummy subject for 'find it really awesome' and changed 'really cute or awesome things' to 'cute or unique things' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'I am' for present continuous states and include 'it' when using structures like 'find it + adjective'.

× But also I like taking photos of nature which I found.

✓ But I also like taking photos of nature that I find.

The original mixes past 'found' with present context. Use present simple 'find' to match the ongoing preference. Also reorder 'also' for natural flow. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with the speaker's general preferences (present simple).

× To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I I love wanderlusting and and and discovering something new.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I love traveling and discovering new places.

The phrase 'wanderlusting' is nonstandard as a verb; use 'traveling' or 'exploring.' Removed repeated filler words. 'Discovering something new' is vague; 'discovering new places' is clearer and fits the context. Suggestion: Use standard verbs like 'travel' or 'explore' instead of informal coinages; avoid filler repetitions.

× Taking new pictures is is really important for me.

✓ Taking new pictures is really important to me.

There is a duplicated 'is' and the natural preposition is 'to me' rather than 'for me' in this context. Use 'important to me' to express personal importance. Suggestion: Remove duplicate words and prefer idiomatic prepositions: 'important to me.'

× But taking pictures in my own country is really boring stuff for me because there's nothing new or there's nothing new adventures that.

✓ But taking pictures in my own country is really boring for me because there are no new experiences or adventures.

'Boring stuff' is colloquial and redundant; 'boring' suffices. 'There's nothing new adventures that' is ungrammatical: use plural 'there are' with 'experiences or adventures' and avoid redundant 'nothing new' twice. Suggestion: Use 'there are no' with plural nouns and choose clearer nouns like 'experiences' or 'adventures'.