视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la précision grammaticale et la clarté. Par exemple, corrigez l'accord et la formulation («taking picture» → «taking pictures», «depends sometimes of» → «sometimes depends on»). Raccourcissez et organisez la réponse: commencez par une idée principale claire, puis donnez un exemple précis en utilisant des mots de liaison («for example», «because»). Évitez les phrases incomplètes et les répétitions.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because the scenery often affects the quality and mood of the photo. For example, a sunrise creates soft, warm light that makes a scene feel peaceful, while a cloudy day can produce a moody atmosphere.

建議: Améliorez la structure et la fluidité en utilisant une phrase principale claire puis des détails soutenus par des connecteurs. Corrigez la grammaire (plural/singular, verb forms) et choisissez un vocabulaire plus précis («dynamic», «bustle», «energy»). Donnez un exemple concret décrivant ce que vous aimez dans les vues urbaines.

範例: I prefer urban views because I find the city more dynamic and full of life. For example, crowded streets and tall buildings create interesting contrasts and energy, which can make photos feel lively and exciting.

建議: Clarifiez l'idée principale et évitez les hésitations verbales («uh»). Structurez la réponse avec un contraste clair (use linking words like «on one hand», «on the other hand»). Développez chaque option avec un détail spécifique (explain what makes you nostalgic, or what excites you about new places).

範例: It depends. On one hand, I prefer views in my home country because familiar places make me feel nostalgic and connected to my memories. On the other hand, I enjoy views in other countries because new landscapes and cultures offer fresh perspectives and inspiration.

× I like taking picture of different views because the quality and the beauty of picture depends sometimes of the views.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because the quality and the beauty of a picture sometimes depend on the views.

Use plural 'pictures' when speaking generally. Use article 'a' before 'picture' when referring to a single example. Use verb 'depend' to agree with the plural subject 'the quality and the beauty' (compound subject takes plural verb). Use preposition 'on' after 'depend'. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures of different views because the quality and beauty of a picture sometimes depend on the views.'

× For example when you take a picture of sunrise at morning is not similar when you take.

✓ For example, a picture of a sunrise in the morning is not the same as another one you take later.

The original sentence lacks needed articles and a clear comparison structure. Add 'a' before 'picture' and 'sunrise', use 'in the morning' as correct prepositional phrase, and complete the comparison with 'is not the same as'. Suggestion: Use complete clauses for comparisons: 'a picture of a sunrise in the morning is not the same as one taken at a different time.'

× I prefer views in urban areas because city is so attractive so as many people move and are so busy.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because the city is very attractive and many people are always busy.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'city' when speaking about cities generally in this context. Replace awkward 'so as many people move' with 'and many people are always busy' to convey meaning. 'So' repeated is unnecessary; use 'very' or 'really' for emphasis. Suggestion: 'I prefer views in urban areas because the city is very attractive and many people are always busy.'

× It dynamic and when you take a pictures in this atmosphere you can feel adrenaline of people's.

✓ It is dynamic, and when you take pictures in this atmosphere you can feel the adrenaline of people.

Missing verb 'is' needed for 'It is dynamic'. Use plural 'pictures'. 'Adrenaline of people's' is incorrect: use 'the adrenaline of people' or 'people's adrenaline' (possessive without extra apostrophe). Also remove unnecessary article before 'adrenaline' depending on phrasing. Suggestion: 'It is dynamic, and when you take pictures in this atmosphere you can feel people's adrenaline.'

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries? Student: It depends, I think I can prefer my home country because I already know places and the views uh make me nostalgic.

✓ It depends. I think I prefer my home country because I already know the places and the views make me nostalgic.

'I can prefer' is unnatural in this context; use 'I prefer' for present preference. Add 'the' before 'places' when referring to specific places known to the speaker. Remove filler 'uh'. 'Make' agrees with plural 'views'. Suggestion: 'I think I prefer my home country because I already know the places and the views make me nostalgic.'

× But I can also prefer in another country because new places.

✓ But I can also prefer another country because of the opportunity to see new places.

'Prefer in another country' is not idiomatic; prefer what? Use 'prefer another country' or 'prefer to visit another country'. Add 'because of' to link reason and complete the clause 'new places' needs context like 'new places to see' or 'the opportunity to see new places.' Suggestion: 'But I can also prefer another country because it offers the opportunity to see new places.'