视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and relevant, but there are some grammar and word-choice errors and minor redundancy. Improve accuracy: correct noun/verb agreement (e.g., 'places', 'I like to experiment'), and spelling ('lighting'). Keep sentences concise (max 5). Add one specific example to make it more vivid. Use a linking phrase to connect ideas (e.g., 'for example', 'also').

範例: Yes, I love taking pictures of scenery when I travel because photos help me remember special moments and places. Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and I also like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot. For example, on my last trip to the coast I waited for golden hour to capture the cliffs glowing in the sunset.

建議: Good clear preference and relevant reasons. Improve coherence by using linking words and correcting small punctuation and article use (e.g., 'the sunset', 'the countryside'). Add a specific detail or brief comparison to urban views to strengthen the answer. Keep it concise and avoid run-on sentences.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery such as mountains and rivers. It is much more peaceful and relaxing, so I feel refreshed when I photograph the sunset or breathe the fresh air in the countryside. In contrast, urban views can be busy and noisy, which is less calming for me.

建議: Your answer communicates preference and reasons, but there are multiple grammar and phrasing errors. Correct singular/plural and repetition ('other countries', 'foreign landscapes', 'gives me a fresh perspective'). Use a linking word to connect ideas and add one concrete example of a memorable foreign view to make it more specific.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because foreign landscapes often feel more exotic and exciting. I love experiencing new cultures and seeing different types of architecture, which gives me a fresh perspective on life. For example, visiting historic temples in Japan last year changed how I think about urban design and public spaces.

× photos help me remember special moments and place.

✓ photos help me remember special moments and places.

The noun 'place' is intended generally and should be plural to match 'moments' and the idea of multiple locations. Use 'places' to indicate more than one location; this fixes a count/number agreement with the noun.

× Photography is a relaxing hobby for me and I like experiment with different angle and lightning to get the perfect shot.

✓ Photography is a relaxing hobby for me and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot.

Multiple errors: after 'like' you need the infinitive 'to experiment' (verb form error related to usage of -ing vs infinitive), 'angle' should be plural 'angles' to match 'different', and 'lightning' is incorrect word choice; the correct noun for illumination is 'lighting'. The corrections fix verb form, plurality, and word choice.

× I prefer views in rural areas, I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas; I love natural scenery like mountains and rivers.

The original has a comma splice connecting two independent clauses; use a semicolon or period. Also add 'and' between 'mountains' and 'rivers' for natural coordination.

× It is much more peaceful and relaxing and I feel refreshed when I take photos of sunset or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

✓ It is much more peaceful and relaxing, and I feel refreshed when I take photos of the sunset or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

Add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses for clarity. Also use the definite article 'the' with 'sunset' when referring to that event in context. This fixes article usage and improves sentence flow.

× I prefer views in other country because foreign landscape feel more exotic and exciting.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because foreign landscapes feel more exotic and exciting.

Use plural 'countries' after 'other' to indicate other nations in general. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to agree with plural concept, and the verb must agree: 'feel' should be 'feel' remains plural matching 'landscapes'.

× I love experiencing new culture and seeing different types of architecture and traveling abroad give me gives me a fresh perspective on life.

✓ I love experiencing new cultures and seeing different types of architecture, and traveling abroad gives me a fresh perspective on life.

Several issues: 'new culture' should be plural 'new cultures' to match general experience. The clause list needs proper commas and conjunctions. 'traveling abroad' is a singular noun phrase and requires the singular verb 'gives' (remove duplicate 'gives me'). Fixes subject-verb agreement and duplicate word error.