视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct word choice and grammar, and add one specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid unrelated or incorrect phrases.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph cityscapes at sunset because the warm light brings out building details and colourful reflections, so my photos look more dramatic.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural and verb forms), and give one or two specific reasons linked with connectors. Replace unclear words with accurate vocabulary.

範例: I prefer urban views because I live in Seoul and enjoy the skyline and busy streets. For instance, tall buildings and neon lights create interesting compositions, and public parks offer contrasts that make photos more dynamic.

建議: Answer directly, use accurate expressions (e.g. "other countries"), and give specific reasons with linking words. Explain what you find different and why it appeals to you.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing different cultures. For example, I love photographing local markets and street food scenes abroad, since they show unique colours, architecture, and everyday life that I don't see at home.

× Absolutely, I like different to view.

✓ Absolutely, I like different views.

The phrase 'different to view' is incorrect. 'Different' should modify a noun, so use the plural noun 'views'. Use 'different views' to express liking various kinds of views. Suggestion: say 'I like different views' or 'I like to see different views.'

× For example, I love watching Laura earlier abuse and I'm like watching City View.

✓ For example, I love watching the landscape earlier in the day, and I also like watching the city view.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains incorrect words ('Laura earlier abuse' makes no sense). I inferred the intended meaning: enjoying views earlier in the day and enjoying city views. Restructure the sentence: use 'the landscape earlier in the day' or 'the view in the morning' and join ideas with 'and'. Use parallel verbs 'love watching' and 'like watching'.

× I like urban area because I live in Seoul, so I like city view and I likes urban skyspinal.

✓ I like urban areas because I live in Seoul, so I like the city view and I like the urban skyline.

Multiple issues: 'urban area' should be plural or preceded by an article ('the urban area') — here 'urban areas' fits general preference. 'city view' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific view. 'I likes' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'I like'. 'skyspinal' is a wrong word; the correct noun is 'skyline'. Suggestions: use 'urban areas', 'the city view', and 'the urban skyline'.

× I like another country because I'm enjoying, I'm keen on. Feeling different to culture, especially cooking and another view like.

✓ I prefer other countries because I enjoy them and I'm keen on experiencing different cultures, especially their food and scenery.

Several errors: 'I like another country' is awkward—'I prefer other countries' expresses preference. 'I'm enjoying' needs an object and present continuous is odd here; 'I enjoy them' is clearer. 'I'm keen on.' was a fragment; combine with what you're keen on. 'Feeling different to culture' uses incorrect preposition and noun form; use 'experiencing different cultures'. 'cooking' is better phrased as 'their food'. 'another view like' is ungrammatical—use 'scenery' or 'different views'. Suggestions: use 'prefer', 'enjoy', 'keen on experiencing', and 'food and scenery'.