视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it has some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Make the topic sentence direct, correct verb usage, and combine ideas succinctly. Add one specific example to make it more vivid. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words for flow.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. Photography is one of my favorite hobbies, so I often photograph nature and wildlife. For example, last summer I spent a morning photographing a family of capybaras by a river, which taught me to be patient and wait for good light.

建議: The main idea is understandable but contains pronunciation/spelling errors and awkward sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct 'row' to 'rural', and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to contrast and give a specific reason or short example to support your preference.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones because the countryside is usually cleaner and less crowded. For instance, I can see clear, colorful sunsets over fields, while in cities smog often hides the horizon.

建議: Your answer gives a clear preference but has grammar errors and an unclear example. Use correct comparative structure ('prefer X to Y'), correct the landmark name (Cristo Redentor / Christ the Redeemer), and offer a concise, specific reason or example. Avoid vague phrasing like 'so I'm confident.'

範例: I prefer views in my own country to those in other countries because Brazil has many spectacular landscapes. For example, the view from Christ the Redeemer in Rio de Janeiro overlooks the bay and mountains, which makes it uniquely breathtaking.

× I enjoy a lot taking photos of nature and animals.

✓ I enjoy taking photos of nature and animals.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed directly by a gerund (-ing form). The phrase 'a lot' is placed awkwardly between verb and gerund. Remove 'a lot' or place it after the verb phrase ('I enjoy taking photos a lot') to avoid breaking the verb+gerund structure.

× I also love taking photos from far away.

✓ I also love taking photos from far away places.

The original sentence uses 'from far away' which is acceptable colloquially but vague. Adding 'places' clarifies the object of 'taking photos from' and improves sentence completeness. Alternatively, 'I also love taking distant photos' could be used.

× I believe views in row areas are much more beautiful than in urban areas is because in the countryside there is no pollution.

✓ I believe views in rural areas are much more beautiful than in urban areas because in the countryside there is no pollution.

'Row areas' is a wrong word; the correct adjective is 'rural'. Additionally, the clause contains an extra 'is' ('...than in urban areas is because...') which is ungrammatical and must be removed. The corrected sentence compares rural and urban views and provides the reason.

× However, in big cities there is a lot of pollution so you cannot see the sunset.

✓ However, in big cities there is a lot of pollution, so you often cannot see the sunset.

The modal 'cannot' is strong and absolute. Using 'often cannot' or 'may not be able to' better matches the intended meaning. Also add a comma before 'so' to join the clauses correctly.

× I prefer views in my own country than in other countries because Brazil is one of the most beautiful places.

✓ I prefer views in my own country to those in other countries because Brazil is one of the most beautiful places.

After 'prefer', the correct preposition is 'to' when making a comparison ('prefer A to B'). Also 'views' in the second part needs a pronoun reference ('those') to avoid repetition. This yields a proper comparative structure.

× For example, the views from the Christ Within Years is regarded as one of the wonders of the world, so I'm confident.

✓ For example, the view from Christ the Redeemer is regarded as one of the wonders of the world, so I'm proud.

The original has multiple issues: 'Christ Within Years' is incorrect—likely intended 'Christ the Redeemer' (a landmark in Brazil); 'views' should be singular 'view' if referring to that landmark, and the verb should agree ('is regarded'). The final clause 'so I'm confident' is awkward in this context; 'so I'm proud' better expresses national pride. Ensure proper noun and subject-verb agreement are correct.