视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes, I do) rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do với từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: capture the scenery as a memory, share with friends). Tránh dùng từ sai (ví dụ: 'scattering' không đúng ở đây) và sửa lỗi chia động từ/ danh từ số nhiều. Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu, thêm một ví dụ cụ thể và liên kết bằng từ nối như 'for example' hoặc 'so'.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos to capture beautiful scenery and keep memories. I also like sharing those pictures with my friends on social media. For example, when I visit a nicely decorated café, I often take a few photos of the background so I can remember the visit.

建議: Câu trả lời hiện tại mơ hồ và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: 'unequal views', 'up to the like difference'). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer... or I like both) rồi nêu lý do cụ thể cho mỗi lựa chọn với từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., 'vibrant', 'peaceful', 'scenic'). Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'however' để kết nối ý. Giữ 2-3 câu súc tích.

範例: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different experiences. Urban areas are vibrant and full of interesting architecture, while rural areas are peaceful and scenic. It depends on my mood and what I want to photograph.

建議: Câu trả lời lặp lại ý trước đó và có lỗi từ vựng ('scanning' sai, 'more convenient and vibrant' cần danh từ/adj phù hợp). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp về sự khác nhau giữa cảnh trong nước và nước ngoài, nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: familiarity, cultural interest, new experiences) và kết luận rõ ràng. Dùng từ nối như 'however' hoặc 'on the other hand'.

範例: I enjoy views both in my own country and abroad for different reasons. At home I appreciate familiar places and local culture, while in other countries I like discovering new landscapes and architecture. Ultimately, it depends on whether I want comfort or a new experience.

× I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy scattering the scenery at the moment as the memory and sharing is with friend.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing the scenery to remember the moment and sharing it with friends.

The student used 'scattering' incorrectly; the correct verb is 'capturing' when talking about taking photos. 'At the moment as the memory' is awkward and should be 'to remember the moment'. 'Sharing is with friend' has incorrect word order and missing articles/plural; correct form is 'sharing it with friends'. Improve by choosing verbs that match photography context and using proper noun phrases and plural forms where needed. Suggestions: replace 'scattering' with 'capturing', use 'to remember the moment', add pronoun 'it' and plural 'friends'.

× For example, when I visit a cafe or a home that's have been nicely decorated, I often take a few photo of the background to remember the visits.

✓ For example, when I visit a cafe or a home that's been nicely decorated, I often take a few photos of the background to remember the visit.

Errors: 'that's have been' should be 'that's been' (subject-verb agreement and contraction with 'that has'), 'a few photo' needs plural 'photos', and 'the visits' should be singular 'the visit' to match the singular occasion. Improve by using correct contraction 'that has been', pluralizing 'photo', and matching article/number with the noun.

× Oh I would say both urban and rural area have their own unequal views and it can be up to the like difference.

✓ Oh, I would say both urban and rural areas have their own different views and it can depend on personal preference.

Problems: 'rural area have' — 'area' should be plural 'areas' to agree with 'urban', and then 'have' correctly agrees with plural but original mismatch caused confusion. 'unequal views' is odd; 'different views' is natural. 'it can be up to the like difference' is ungrammatical; correct idiom is 'it can depend on personal preference'. Improve by ensuring plural nouns match and using natural collocations 'different views' and 'depend on'.

× Oh I would say both urban and rural areas have different advantages. Urban areas have more convenient and vibrant while rural areas are more peaceful and scanning.

✓ Oh, I would say both urban and rural areas have different advantages. Urban areas are more convenient and vibrant, while rural areas are more peaceful and scenic.

Errors: 'have more convenient and vibrant' incorrectly uses adjectives without a verb structure; use 'are more convenient and vibrant' or 'offer more convenience and vibrancy'. 'scanning' is the wrong word; the intended adjective is 'scenic'. Improve by using correct linking verb 'are' with adjectives and choosing the correct adjective 'scenic'.

× So it's depend on what you prefer.

✓ So it depends on what you prefer.

Error: 'it's depend' is incorrect verb form; with 'it' and present tense should be 'it depends'. Use third person singular 'depends'. Improve by conjugating the verb correctly to match the subject.