视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms (e.g., 'taking' → 'take'), remove filler words, and make sentences concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Aim for natural collocations (e.g., 'natural scenery' instead of 'natural beauties').

範例: I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountains and rivers because I love natural scenery, and I visit several spots each month to capture changing light and seasons.

建議: Clarify the main idea and correct sentence structure. Begin with a clear preference statement, then give specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'as'. Use plural/singular correctly and avoid repeated phrases.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more peaceful than cities. For instance, rural landscapes often have mountains, rivers, farms and abundant greenery, which I find more relaxing and photogenic.

建議: Speak more precisely and correct tense/use of phrases. Start with a direct answer ('I prefer...'), then give a couple of specific supporting details and avoid repetition and fillers. Mention reasons such as familiarity, memories, or convenience to make the answer richer.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I have lived here for many years and know many beautiful places from childhood. For example, I often revisit coastal towns and mountain valleys that hold special memories and are easy for me to travel to.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views because I feel very enjoyable this activity.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy this activity very much.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to': 'like taking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also 'feel very enjoyable' is incorrect: 'enjoy' is the correct verb and adverb placement 'very much' modifies 'enjoy'. Suggestion: use 'like taking' and 'enjoy this activity very much'.

× And I also like to take pictures of mountains, rivers and lake or natural beauties.

✓ And I also like to take pictures of mountains, rivers and lakes or natural natural scenery.

List items should have consistent plural forms when referring to multiple examples: 'lake' should be plural 'lakes' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'natural beauties' is awkward; use 'natural scenery'.

× So I often take pictures of, uh, multiple places and visit them places.

✓ So I often visit many places and take pictures of them.

The original contains redundant and misplaced words 'visit them places' and wrong word order. Restructure the sentence to 'visit many places and take pictures of them' for correct grammar and clarity (Grammar Problem Type 26).

× Viewena rural area, because the atmosphere is very quiet and calm in a rural area, as well as rural area contains natural beauties like mountain, rivers, animals and farm, lots of greenery, so I like to view in a rural.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the atmosphere is quiet and calm. Rural areas have natural attractions like mountains, rivers, animals, farms and lots of greenery, so I like to see rural views.

The original has several issues: wrong phrase 'Viewena', inconsistent singular/plural, repeated 'rural area', and poor sentence flow. Combined clauses and corrected plurals (mountains, farms) and wording for clarity. This is primarily sentence structure problems (Grammar Problem Type 26) and also plural issues (Grammar Problem Type 1).

× Uh, of course I prefer to views in my own country because I have been from many years.

✓ Uh, of course I prefer views in my own country because I have been here for many years.

Use 'views in' or 'viewing in' correctly; more importantly 'have been from many years' is incorrect. Use 'have been here for many years' with preposition 'for' to indicate duration (Grammar Problem Type 11).

× I can say that since my childhood, so I have seen a lot of beautiful things in my country.

✓ I can say that since my childhood I have seen a lot of beautiful places in my country.

The original sentence had an unnecessary 'so' after 'since my childhood' causing a sentence structure issue. Change 'beautiful things' to 'beautiful places' for natural collocation. This also addresses gerund/tense continuity (Grammar Problem Type 8 and 6).

× I also visited a lot of places.

✓ I have also visited many places.

Using present perfect 'have visited' is more appropriate when relating past experiences to the present. Also 'many' is more natural than 'a lot of' in this context. This corrects tense and sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type 5 and 26).

× So I love to, uh, I love to view of my countries.

✓ So I love to see the views of my country.

'My countries' is incorrect if the speaker means their own country; use singular 'my country'. 'Love to view of' is ungrammatical; use 'love to see the views of' or 'love viewing my country'. This corrects pronoun/number and prepositional use (Grammar Problem Type 12 and 11).