视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 内容总体不错，表达清晰但有几个需要改进的地方：1) 语法和用词：注意单复数和介词（如 “photo” 应为 “photos”，“from the front of the side” 不自然，应改为 “from the front or the side”）。2) 简洁性：避免重复（如两次提到“different”）。3) 逻辑衔接：使用连接词让句子更自然，比如使用 because, so, for instance 等。4) 长度控制：答案可更精炼，尽量保持 2–3 句即可。

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing the same scene from different angles because each angle reveals new details and changes the composition. For instance, photographing a building from the front or from the side highlights different shadows and alters the perceived size.

建議: 回答具体且有例子，表达自然。但有小错误和可改进点：1) 用词准确性：将 “birds, song” 改为 “birdsong” 或 “the songs of birds”。2) 句子流畅度：可用连接词优化句子节奏。3) 精简：可把两个句子合并为一句更紧凑的回答。

範例: I prefer rural views because I can hear birdsong and the gentle rustling of trees, which makes me feel relaxed. For example, I often visit nearby fields at sunrise to photograph the soft morning light and the tranquil atmosphere.

建議: 回答不够自然且有重复和犹豫语气：1) 避免重复与犹豫词（如两次“I can”，“you know”），这会影响流利度。2) 语法和词汇：使用复数或定冠词（如 “other countries” 或 “views in other countries”），并修正 “town hometown” 的重复。3) 补充理由或具体例子，使回答更有说服力。4) 控制句子数在 2–3 句内，避免跑题。

範例: I prefer views in other countries because travelling allows me to experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, visiting coastal towns in another country gave me completely different coastal light and architecture compared to my hometown.

× I enjoy taking photo from different angles.

✓ I enjoy taking photos from different angles.

句子中的名词“photo”應使用複數“photos”，因為動詞“taking”表達的是一種習慣或泛指行為，所以名詞要用複數形式。建議：當談論一般性的拍攝活動時，用“photos”或“pictures”。

× It is because each angle review new details and changes the composition.

✓ It is because each angle reveals new details and changes the composition.

原句主語“each angle”是單數，動詞應使用第三人稱單數形式。原句用了“review”不符合語意，應改為“reveals”表示『顯示、揭示』。建議：主語為 each/of the 結構時，動詞用第三人稱單數，並選擇語意合適的動詞。

× For example, when I photograph a building from the front of the side, it reveals different shadow and different size of the building.

✓ For example, when I photograph a building from the front or the side, it reveals different shadows and different sizes of the building.

原句“from the front of the side”不合語法，應使用“from the front or the side”表示兩種角度；名詞“shadow”和“size”應使用複數形式“shadows”“sizes”，因為從不同角度會產生多種陰影和大小感覺。建議：使用正確的連詞(or)連接選項，並根據語境決定單複數。

× I prefer taking photos in rural areas because I can hear birds, song and the gentle rustling of the trees, which makes me feel very relaxed.

✓ I prefer taking photos in rural areas because I can hear birdsong and the gentle rustling of the trees, which make me feel very relaxed.

“birds, song”分開不自然，應合成“birdsong”表示鳥鳴；關係代詞所指代的複合主語“birdsong and the gentle rustling of the trees”為複數，因此關係從句中動詞應使用複數形式“make”。建議：把相關名詞合併成常用短語（birdsong），並注意關係從句的主謂一致。

× For example, I often go to the nearby fields at sunrise to photograph the morning lights and peaceful atmosphere.

✓ For example, I often go to the nearby fields at sunrise to photograph the morning light and the peaceful atmosphere.

“morning lights”不太常用，通常說“morning light”作不可數；“peaceful atmosphere”前應加定冠詞“the”來特指那時的氛圍。建議：使用不可數名詞時用單數形式，必要時使用冠詞指明特定情境。

× Well, I would say I prefer the view of other country because I can I can go sightseeing in other places instead of staying in my own town hometown and you know.

✓ Well, I would say I prefer the views of other countries because I can go sightseeing in other places instead of staying in my own hometown.

多處錯誤：1) “the view of other country”應為複數“views of other countries”或“the view of another country”，因為指多個國家或其他國家的一般情況；2) 重複了“I can”；3) “my own town hometown”冗餘，應保留“my hometown”；4) 句尾“and you know”在正式回答中不必要且口語化，可刪除。建議：簡化表達，注意單複數一致並避免重複詞語與口語填充語。