视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Улучшите связность и грамматику: начните с прямого ответа, затем дайте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте заполнителей (uh, umm) и ошибок в форме слов (например, "take photo" → "taking photos"). Используйте связки (for example, because, so) и правильные артикли/множественное число (e.g., "interesting views").

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing nature because I live in a village surrounded by fields and trees. For example, I often take photos at sunrise when the light creates interesting colors.

建議: Исправьте грамматику и конкретизируйте причину: начните с ясного утверждения, затем объясните, почему, с конкретным примером. Устраняйте повторы и неясные фразы ("there are nobody"). Используйте правильные предлоги и числа: "in rural areas", "nobody around".

範例: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because there are fewer people and more open spaces. For instance, in the countryside I can set up my camera on a tripod without interruptions and capture peaceful landscapes.

建議: Улучшите точность выражения и словарный выбор: ответьте прямо, затем приведите конкретные примеры мест. Избегайте разговорных слов типа "cool and awesome" в формальном тесте; используйте более точные описания (e.g., "scenic" "diverse landscapes"). Закончите мысль; не оставляйте предложение незаконченным.

範例: I prefer taking pictures in my own country because it offers a wide variety of scenic landscapes. For example, we have green fields, forests and mountains that provide diverse backdrops for landscape photography.

× So actually I can say that I adore taking pictures of my, uh, phone.

✓ So actually I can say that I adore taking pictures with my phone.

The student used 'of my phone' which is uncommon when describing photographing with a device. Use 'taking pictures with my phone' to show the instrument. Also 'taking pictures' is correct - keep the -ing form. Suggestion: use 'with' to indicate the tool used for taking photos.

× Yeah, and I like, umm, take photo with nature because I'm living in village and there are a lot of interesting view.

✓ Yeah, and I like taking photos of nature because I live in a village and there are a lot of interesting views.

Errors: 'like take' should be 'like taking' (verb + -ing after 'like'). 'photo' should be plural 'photos' to match general activity. Use 'of nature' rather than 'with nature'. 'I'm living in village' is unnatural; use simple present 'I live in a village'. 'a lot of interesting view' needs plural 'views'. Suggestion: after verbs of preference use gerund; use articles with 'village' and pluralize countable nouns.

× So honestly, I can say that I like taking picture on rural areas, uh, because there are nobody, nobody and you can do anything and that's all.

✓ So honestly, I can say that I like taking pictures in rural areas, because there is nobody there and you can do anything.

Preposition: use 'in rural areas' (not 'on'). 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures'. 'there are nobody' is wrong: use 'there is nobody there' or 'there are no people'. Removed redundant 'nobody, nobody'. 'that's all' is conversational filler and can be omitted. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations, pluralize countable nouns, and use correct existential structure ('there is/are').

× Oh, interesting question. I think that I prefer taking picture in my country because there are a lot of opportunity for doing a cool and awesome photos.

✓ Oh, interesting question. I think that I prefer taking pictures in my country because there are a lot of opportunities for taking cool and awesome photos.

Problems: 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural). 'there are a lot of opportunity' needs plural 'opportunities' or 'a lot of opportunity' is uncountable but here plural is correct. 'for doing a cool and awesome photos' mixes 'doing' with plural 'photos' incorrectly — use 'for taking cool and awesome photos'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and use 'take photos' not 'do photos'.

× Yeah, because there are a lot of place such as greenfields, mountains and.

✓ Yeah, because there are a lot of places such as green fields and mountains.

Use plural 'places' not 'place'. 'greenfields' should be two words 'green fields' or 'green fields' as plural. The sentence was incomplete; removed trailing 'and.' Suggestion: pluralize nouns and list items clearly; avoid trailing conjunctions.