视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g. "I like taking photos of different views"). Expand with one supporting detail using a linking phrase (e.g. "because" or "so") and keep it to 2–3 sentences. Watch verb forms ("to remember" not "to memory") and articles.

範例: I enjoy taking photos of different views. I do it because it’s a hobby that helps me remember scenes and the feelings I had at the time, so I can look back on those moments later.

建議: Give a clear direct answer and use correct grammar and linking words. Start with a topic sentence ("I prefer rural views") then add specific reasons with coherent linking words ("because", "for example"). Correct countable/uncountable errors ("many people", "beautiful scenery") and avoid filler words.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because there are fewer people and the landscapes are more peaceful. For example, I enjoy photographing mountains, rivers and lakes since they offer more natural beauty and quiet for composing shots.

建議: Make your response grammatically correct and precise. State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific supporting points. Use correct tense and word choice ("When I travel, I see many beautiful mountains, lakes and ancient towns that make me feel proud"). Avoid vague or incorrect words like "incorrectable".

範例: I prefer views in my own country. When I travel around China I often see beautiful mountains, lakes and ancient towns, and these places make me feel proud of my country’s scenery.

× Yes, I would like like taking pictures of different views because this is one of my hobbies to memory what I see or what I thought and it's also can give me really good moment to remember it.

✓ Yes, I would like to take pictures of different views because it is one of my hobbies to remember what I see or what I think, and it can also give me very good moments to remember them.

The phrase 'would like' should be followed by the base verb, not the -ing form (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Like like' is a repetition error. 'To memory' is incorrect; use 'to remember'. 'What I thought' should be 'what I think' to match present habitual meaning (present tense consistency, Type 6). 'It's also can give' has incorrect auxiliary order; use 'it can also give'. Use plural 'moments' and 'them' to refer to pictures (plural agreement, Type 1). Suggested improvement: after 'would like' use base verb 'to take'; keep tense consistent for habitual activities and maintain correct word order for modals.

× I think I prefer a views in the rural areas because there are not too much many people around that areas and usually I can solve really beautiful sceneries like mountains or rivers or lakes and that's really good perception for for me.

✓ I think I prefer views in rural areas because there are not too many people around those areas, and usually I can see really beautiful scenery like mountains, rivers, or lakes, which is a really good experience for me.

Errors include incorrect article with plural noun 'a views' (should be 'views', Type 1/22), incorrect quantifier 'not too much many' should be 'not too many' (Type 14), incorrect demonstrative 'that areas' should be 'those areas' (Type 11/pronoun), 'solve' is wrong verb; context requires 'see' (verb choice, Type 26), 'sceneries' is usually 'scenery' as an uncountable noun (Type 1), and 'perception' is the wrong noun; 'experience' fits context (vocabulary). Also repeated 'for for' removed. Suggestions: use correct pluralization and quantifiers, choose proper verbs (see) and uncountable nouns (scenery), and use 'those' for plural demonstratives.

× I prefer views in my own country because in China there are lots of beautiful sceneries you can explore.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because in China there are lots of beautiful scenery you can explore.

'Sceneries' is incorrect; 'scenery' is normally an uncountable noun (Type 1). The rest is present simple and appropriate for habitual preference. Suggestion: use 'scenery' when referring to landscapes in general; if you mean individual places you can say 'many beautiful scenic spots'.

× For example, when I do traveling, I thought a lot of beautiful mountains and lakes and ancient towns, which I felt really incorrectable and proud.

✓ For example, when I travel, I see many beautiful mountains, lakes, and ancient towns, which make me feel very impressed and proud.

Multiple issues: 'do traveling' is unnatural; use 'travel' (verb choice). 'Thought' (past tense) is wrong here for describing seeing while traveling; use present simple 'see' for general statements or past simple 'saw' if referring to specific past trips (Type 5/6). 'A lot of' should modify countable nouns correctly: use 'many' with countable plural nouns (Type 14). 'Incorrectable' is not a word; likely intended 'incredible' or 'impressed'. Chose 'impressed' to match 'feel impressed and proud'. Also verb agreement 'which make me feel' (plural subject) rather than 'felt'. Suggestions: choose correct verb forms to match whether you mean habitual or past events, use appropriate adjectives, and ensure subject-verb agreement.