视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response did not directly answer the examiner's question in your own words and simply echoed the question followed by a very short affirmation. To improve: (1) Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question directly (e.g., "Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views"). (2) Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") to explain why or when you take photos. (3) Keep the answer natural and within 3–5 sentences. Example structure: direct answer + reason + brief example.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember places. For example, when I travel I take photos of city skylines and mountain landscapes to capture the atmosphere. I usually use my phone and try to photograph at golden hour to get better light.

建議: The response is unclear and does not address the question. To improve: (1) Give a direct answer (urban or rural). (2) Use a linking word to add one or two supporting reasons or comparisons (e.g., "because", "however"). (3) Provide a short specific example or detail to make the answer convincing. Keep it natural and concise (2–4 sentences).

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because I like wide open spaces and natural scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing fields and forests since they feel peaceful, whereas city views can be crowded and noisy.

建議: The answer repeats the examiner's question and does not state a preference or provide reasons. To improve: (1) State your preference clearly (own country, other countries, or both). (2) Use a linking phrase to give a reason or brief example (e.g., "because", "for instance"). (3) Keep it specific and natural within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultures. For instance, photographing architecture abroad allows me to capture styles I can't find at home, which makes my travel photos more varied.

× Do you like taking a picture of different views? Yes, I like it too.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views too.

The student repeated the examiner's question form and used 'a picture' (singular) while referring generally to different views, which requires plural 'pictures'. Also 'it' is vague; better to repeat the gerund phrase 'taking pictures' for clarity. Use plural to match general activities. ID:12

× You prefer you. You prefer foods in urban areas or urban areas.

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

The student confused pronouns and repeated 'you' and 'urban areas'. The examiner asked a question; the student should mirror the structure 'Do you prefer...' with the correct objects ('views' not 'foods') and contrast 'urban areas or rural areas'. Use 'Do you' for question form and correct nouns. ID:12

× Do you prefer views in your own country, in a or in a other country?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in another country?

The student inserted extra articles 'a' and used 'a other country' which is incorrect. Use the comparative conjunction 'or' and the correct determiner 'another' (a+other contracted) when referring to a different country. Also maintain question structure 'Do you prefer...'. ID:12