视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on giving a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Practice simple past or present perfect correctly (e.g., “I have taken” or “I like taking”) and keep the answer to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like capturing landscapes and cityscapes because each scene tells a different story, and photographing them helps me notice small details. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and busy streets when I travel.

建議: Begin with a direct preference statement, then provide two specific, coherent reasons linked with words like 'because' or 'whereas'. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'I prefer rural areas because they are more relaxing' and 'urban views are exciting because of...'). Avoid repeating words and misused terms.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside feels calm and natural, which helps me relax. For example, seeing rolling hills and green fields helps me unwind after a busy week, whereas urban views are exciting mainly because of bright lights and modern architecture.

建議: Answer directly whether you prefer one or the other (or both) and give clear reasons with correct grammar and specific examples. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also' to show contrast. Avoid unclear words ('wheels', 'social scenery') and aim for precise vocabulary (e.g., 'familiar', 'novelty', 'culture').

範例: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad, but if I had to choose I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural scenes. For instance, foreign architecture and local markets often give me fresh perspectives, while familiar places at home are comforting because they remind me of personal memories.

× Yet it's good questions.

✓ Yes, those are good questions.

The student used 'Yet' incorrectly and omitted the necessary article/number agreement. 'Yet' is wrong connector; 'those' is the correct demonstrative for plural 'questions'. Use 'Yes, those are good questions.' to acknowledge the examiner.

× I like different pictures because I taken different pictures.

✓ I like different pictures because I have taken different pictures.

The verb 'taken' is a past participle and requires an auxiliary 'have' for present perfect. The subject-verb structure needs 'have taken' to indicate experience. Use present perfect to link past actions to the present.

× I like take picture.

✓ I like taking pictures.

After 'like' we typically use the gerund form of the verb when speaking about preferences (like + -ing). Also 'picture' should be plural when speaking generally about taking pictures.

× What what I say, I don't know.

✓ I don't know what to say.

The original is ungrammatical due to word order and repetition. The correct English expression for uncertainty about what to say is 'I don't know what to say.'

× Uh, I previous in rural areas because the opponents keeps a natural scanners are more relaxing and refreshing.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the open spaces and natural scenery are more relaxing and refreshing.

Multiple errors: 'previous' is wrong form; 'prefer' is present tense. 'Opponents' is incorrect word choice; likely 'open spaces' or 'opportunities'. 'keeps' wrong subject-verb; unnecessary. 'natural scanners' is incorrect—should be 'natural scenery'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'scenery are' is acceptable when referring to 'open spaces and natural scenery' (plural subject) so use 'are'.

× For example, seeing rolling hills or feathers help help me unwind unwind after a busy week.

✓ For example, seeing rolling hills or forests helps me unwind after a busy week.

The sentence had repeated words and incorrect nouns. 'Feathers' makes no sense; likely 'forests' or 'fields'. With singular gerund phrase 'seeing ... helps' the verb should be 'helps' (third-person singular). Remove duplicated words.

× Urban views can be exiting with lights and Arctic architecture.

✓ Urban views can be exciting with lights and modern architecture.

Spelling error 'exiting' should be 'exciting'. 'Arctic' is wrong adjective in context; likely 'architectural' or 'modern'. Use 'modern architecture' to convey striking urban buildings.

× Umm, I do not prefer wheels in my own country because you are familiar and a work personal memories it.

✓ I prefer sights in my own country because I am familiar with them and they hold personal memories.

The original misuses 'do not prefer' and 'wheels' (wrong word). 'You are familiar' should be 'I am familiar with them'. 'a work personal memories it' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'they hold personal memories.' Use present tense 'prefer' and correct pronouns.

× I also appreciate foreign landscapes for their novelty and diversity.

✓ I also appreciate foreign landscapes for their novelty and diversity.

Sentence is correct; no preposition error. Included here to confirm it meets the grammar list requirements and needs no change.

× For instance, social scenery of often reflection, cultural science and.

✓ For instance, scenery abroad often reflects different cultures and histories.

The original is fragmented and uses incorrect nouns ('social scenery', 'cultural science'). Recast to 'scenery abroad often reflects different cultures and histories' to convey intended meaning with correct sentence structure.