视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid filler sounds (uh, um) and correct verb forms and pronouns. Aim for 2–4 coherent sentences with specific detail about what you photograph and why.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember new places and experiences. For example, I often photograph interesting city streets and mountain scenes so I can look back and recall how they felt. Taking pictures also encourages me to notice small details I might otherwise forget.

建議: Give a direct answer then add one or two clear reasons with concrete details. Correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid unclear phrases. Use a linking word (because, so, although) to connect ideas and provide a short example of a preferred scene to make the answer specific.

範例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy nature and quiet surroundings. For instance, I like photographing fields and forests since they feel peaceful compared with the busy city where I live. Because of that contrast, being in the countryside helps me relax and take better photos.

建議: Answer directly and give a clear comparison. Use linking words (both…but; however; on the other hand) and specific reasons for each option. Avoid vague phrases and finish with a concise preference and reason. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use accurate vocabulary (prefer, country, travel).

範例: Both views in my country and abroad have advantages: my country feels familiar and rich in culture, while other countries offer new architecture and styles. However, when I travel I usually prefer city views because I enjoy exploring different urban designs, cafes, and busy streets that are great for photography.

× Yes, I like it I'm constantly take it uh, cause, uh, I don't really believe my brain.

✓ Yes, I like it. I'm constantly taking pictures, because I don't really trust my memory.

The verb 'take' after 'constantly' requires the -ing form (progressive) to indicate a repeated action. Also 'believe my brain' is unnatural; use 'trust my memory'. Add a period to separate clauses and improve clarity.

× So I want remind me that I need a lot of new things.

✓ So I want to remind myself that I need a lot of new things.

After 'want' the correct structure is 'want to + base verb' (want to remind). The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is required when the subject and object refer to the same person. This fixes verb form and pronoun use.

× So there is a great uh, product here, so it's keep in mind for me, so.

✓ There is a great product here, so it helps me keep things in mind.

'It's keep in mind' is ungrammatical; use 'helps me keep' to express function. Also remove unnecessary filler words for clarity. 'There is' is acceptable but the main issue is verb choice and structure.

× I really did the uh, rural areas close umm, my bars price is already borrowed price so umm, I love the natural and all.

✓ I really prefer rural areas because the air here feels stale; I love nature and so on.

The original uses incorrect verbs and pronouns ('did the rural areas close', 'my bars price is already borrowed price') that do not convey meaning. 'Prefer' expresses choice. 'Love the natural' should be 'love nature'. Clarify the intended idea: city air is stale, so preferring rural areas.

× I are really feeling quiet 'cause I live in the city so umm, I want to live fresh.

✓ I really feel quiet because I live in the city, so I want to live somewhere with fresher air.

Use the singular verb 'feel' with subject 'I' (not 'are'). 'Live fresh' is awkward; specify 'somewhere with fresher air' to match meaning.

× Umm, so both are really half the great things each other.

✓ Both have their great things.

The original incorrectly combines words ('half the great things each other'). Use the idiomatic expression 'both have their great things' to indicate each option has advantages.

× Umm, But if I go to the travel.

✓ But if I go traveling,

Use the -ing form 'traveling' after 'go' to indicate engaging in travel. 'Go to the travel' is incorrect.

× So I'd like to choose the, uh, city areas 'cause I really used to, but.

✓ So I'd like to choose city areas because I'm used to them, but...

After 'used to' when meaning accustomed, use 'I'm used to them' (adjective + preposition + pronoun). 'Choose the city areas' is fine but 'the' is unnecessary; plural pronoun 'them' refers back to 'city areas'.