视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/word order errors.

範例: No, I don't usually take pictures of views. I prefer to enjoy the scenery with my own eyes because photographing can distract me and prevent me from fully experiencing the moment. For example, when I visit a sunset spot I like to watch it directly rather than looking through a camera.

建議: Give a clear, fluent response with correct grammar and specific supporting details. Use linking words (first, also, for example) and correct singular/plural and verb forms. Keep to 3–4 sentences maximum.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas. First, the countryside feels peaceful and less crowded, which helps me relax. Also, natural landscapes such as colorful mountains and fields are refreshing and make me feel recharged, for example when I go hiking in the hills.

建議: Answer directly and provide a clear reason with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrasing and repetition. Use one linking word to connect your reason and provide a brief example or consequence.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new scenery and experiences. For instance, seeing unfamiliar architecture or landscapes abroad inspires me and breaks the routine of familiar local views.

× No I don't. Basically I would like to enjoy some views with my eyes.

✓ No, I don't. Basically, I would like to enjoy some views with my eyes.

Add missing punctuation and commas for clarity; 'would like' is acceptable as a polite preference (modal-like), so mainly punctuation fixes improve readability.

× You taking picture is good way to remember but it I consider I cannot enjoy all of.

✓ Taking pictures is a good way to remember, but I think I cannot enjoy all of them.

Original sentence has incorrect gerund phrase form and word order. 'You taking picture' should be 'Taking pictures' (gerund as subject and plural 'pictures' for general meaning) and 'it I consider' is incorrect; change to 'I think'. Also add 'them' as object of 'all of'. This fixes sentence structure and pronoun reference.

× I like rural areas. They are. There are several reasons why for this.

✓ I like rural areas. There are several reasons for this.

Redundant fragment 'They are.' is incomplete and 'reasons why for this' has wrong word order. Removing the fragment and using 'There are several reasons for this' corrects the structure.

× First, rural areas gives me a great impression.

✓ First, rural areas give me a great impression.

Plural subject 'rural areas' requires the base verb form 'give' rather than 'gives'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× For example, mountain has a lot of color.

✓ For example, a mountain has a lot of color.

Countable singular noun 'mountain' needs an article ('a mountain'). Alternatively, use plural 'mountains have' if speaking generally.

× It makes me refresh.

✓ It refreshes me.

Using 'refresh' as a transitive verb ('refreshes me') is natural. 'Makes me refresh' is unnatural because 'refresh' usually means 'feel refreshed'—so 'refreshes me' is correct.

× I prefer views in other countries because the views in my countries I used use it to view.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because the views in my country I am used to seeing.

Several errors: 'my countries' should be 'my country' (singular possessive), awkward phrase 'I used use it to view' should be 'I am used to seeing' to express familiarity. Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'views' or keep for specificity; here 'the views in my country' is acceptable.

× So I like to change the view.

✓ So I like to change the scenery.

'Change the view' is understandable but 'change the scenery' is more natural in English. This preserves intended meaning and improves collocation.