视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp cơ bản, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác hơn; làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn và tự nhiên (không quá 5 câu). Cụ thể: thay “reserve memories” bằng “preserve memories”, bỏ một trong hai “different”, sửa “city's guidelines” thành “city skyline” hoặc “city streets”, và thêm một liên từ để nối ý hợp lý.

範例: Yes, I do. I like taking photos because they help me preserve memories and capture beautiful scenes. For example, I often photograph sunsets over the city skyline since they remind me of places I have visited.

建議: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và chính tả, dùng cụm từ tự nhiên hơn, và cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu quan điểm, rồi giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi như “Rd. reviews”, “re reminds”, “green rice feels”. Nên dùng “rural areas”, “rice fields”.

範例: I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside. The rustic scenery often reminds me of my childhood; for example, the green rice fields and quiet lanes always make me feel relaxed.

建議: Khắc phục lặp từ, đúng số nhiều/số ít và hoàn thành câu ví dụ; làm câu rõ ràng hơn bằng cách nêu ý chính rồi cụ thể hóa. Thay “it it” bằng “it”, “peaceful beach” thành “peaceful beaches”, và hoàn thành phần mô tả nơi ví dụ.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes, from dramatic mountains to peaceful beaches. For example, the national park near my hometown has several stunning viewpoints where you can see sweeping valley and coastline views.

× Taking pictures helps me reserve memories and capture the beauty of different different views.

✓ Taking pictures help me preserve memories and capture the beauty of different views.

'Reserve memories' is incorrect collocation; use 'preserve memories'. Duplicate word 'different different' should be a single 'different'. Also subject 'Taking pictures' can be treated as plural here, so use 'help' rather than 'helps'. 'the beauty of different views' keeps article usage correct. Suggestion: Use correct collocations and avoid duplicate words: 'Taking pictures help me preserve memories and capture the beauty of different views.'

× For example, I like photographing sunsets in the city's guidelines because they remind me of place I have visited.

✓ For example, I like photographing sunsets in the city because they remind me of places I have visited.

'city's guidelines' is meaningless here; likely intended 'city' without possessive. 'place I have visited' needs plural 'places' to match 'they'. Also use present perfect 'have visited' is fine to indicate past experience relevant now. Suggestion: Keep nouns consistent and match pronouns: '...sunsets in the city because they remind me of places I have visited.'

× I prefer Rd. reviews.

✓ I prefer rural views.

Original 'Rd. reviews' appears to be a typo; intended 'rural views' (plural). Ensure correct word choice and plurality. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and plural form: 'I prefer rural views.'

× I was born and raised in the countryside so the rustic scenery always re reminds me of my childhood.

✓ I was born and raised in the countryside, so the rustic scenery always reminds me of my childhood.

There is a duplicated fragment 're reminds' — should be single 'reminds'. Also need a comma before 'so' linking clauses. Adverb placement not the main issue but duplication and punctuation were wrong. Suggestion: Remove duplicate and add comma: '...countryside, so the rustic scenery always reminds me of my childhood.'

× For example, the green rice feels and quiet lanes make me feel relaxed.

✓ For example, the green rice fields and quiet lanes make me feel relaxed.

'rice feels' is a typo; correct plural noun is 'rice fields'. Ensure plural noun 'fields' to agree with 'lanes' and verb 'make'. Suggestion: Use correct noun and plural: 'the green rice fields and quiet lanes make me feel relaxed.'

× I think my country has the best views in the world because it it offers a great variety of landscape, from dramatic mountains to peaceful beach.

✓ I think my country has some of the best views in the world because it offers a great variety of landscapes, from dramatic mountains to peaceful beaches.

Duplicate 'it it' remove one. 'the best views' is acceptable but 'some of the best' is more natural; however main issues are noun forms: 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' and 'beach' should be plural 'beaches' to match list. Suggestion: Fix duplication and pluralize nouns: '...it offers a great variety of landscapes, from dramatic mountains to peaceful beaches.'

× For example, the National Park near my hometown has stunning viewpoints where you can see.

✓ For example, the national park near my hometown has stunning viewpoints where you can see the surrounding valleys and rivers.

Sentence ends abruptly 'where you can see.' It needs an object or clause describing what you can see. Also 'National Park' need not be capitalized unless a proper name. Suggestion: Complete the sentence with the sights visible: '...viewpoints where you can see the surrounding valleys and rivers.'