聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unnecessary words and grammatical errors (e.g., tense, word order). Use linking words like “for example” or “also” correctly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. For example, when I travel I tell them about the places I visit and share photos on my phone, so they can see what I saw.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one concrete example. Correct word choice (career, not carrier) and use linking words like “because” or “so” to explain. Avoid asking a question in your answer—answer it instead.

範例: I usually talk to friends about my ideas and career plans. Because many of them study different courses and do research, I often ask for their advice about what steps to take next.

建議: Give a clear preference sentence and one or two specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “for example.” Improve grammar (plural/singular, article use) and avoid vague phrases.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because people have different opinions, which helps me see other points of view. For example, group conversations are often lively and make me laugh while I learn new ideas.

建議: Give a direct answer and one clear reason. Reduce fillers (um, uh) and correct phrasing. Use linking words like “because” and be specific about what is better in face-to-face communication (e.g., body language, tone).

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is easier to read body language and tone, and sensitive topics feel more comfortable to discuss in person.

建議: Answer directly and explain briefly with clear, appropriate vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words (e.g., ‘sons’). Use linking words such as “because” or “so” and give a concrete, concise example of a cause of arguments.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because they can be stubborn and refuse to accept a mistake. For example, I once argued with a friend who insisted on doing something risky despite my warnings.

× I usually when I go to the visit I share all my experience and knowledge while visiting the areas.

✓ I usually, when I go to visit, share all my experiences and knowledge while visiting the area.

Problems: incorrect use of 'to the visit' and singular/plural forms. Type 10 (present participle) applies because 'visiting the areas' should be 'visiting the area' or 'visiting areas' depending on meaning; also 'to visit' is the correct infinitive. Suggestion: remove 'the' before 'visit' and use 'visit' as an infinitive; use 'experiences' plural if referring to multiple events and use 'the area' or 'areas' consistently.

× Also send them photos by clicking on the mobile so.

✓ I also send them photos by taking them with my mobile phone.

Problem: awkward verb choice 'clicking on the mobile' and misplaced 'so'. Type 10 (present participle) because 'clicking' is informally used; better verb is 'taking'. Suggestion: use 'take photos with my mobile phone' and place 'also' before the verb for natural word order.

× I mostly chat with friends about my ideas and careers when I take advice from my friends about the carriers and what do I do next?

✓ I mostly chat with friends about my ideas and career and ask them for advice about my future and what to do next.

Problems: sentence structure and word choice ('careers'/'carriers') and incorrect question form 'what do I do next?'. Type 26 (sentence structure) applies. Suggestion: use 'career' singular when referring to one's profession, rephrase the question as an embedded clause 'what to do next', and avoid repeating 'friends'.

× My friends are so knowledgeable and they take all of the courses and they research on this.

✓ My friends are very knowledgeable; they take many courses and they research this topic.

Problems: awkward 'so' + adjective, wrong preposition 'research on'. Type 10 (present participle) for 'researching' idea and 11 (prepositions) partially relevant but per instructions correct only types listed: here corrected to natural collocation 'research this topic'. Suggestion: use 'very knowledgeable', 'take many courses', and 'research this topic' or 'do research on this topic'.

× I prefer chat with group friends because they have different opinion about my words and my things.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of friends because they have different opinions about what I say and my matters.

Problems: missing 'to' before infinitive 'chat', article use 'group friends' should be 'a group of friends', singular/plural 'opinion' -> 'opinions'. Type 10 (present participle) covers infinitive usage here; also type 1 (singular/plural). Suggestion: use 'prefer to chat with a group of friends' and plural 'opinions'.

× While chatting with the group of members it feels like funny in the serious service making me laugh and I also get different opinion.

✓ When I chat with a group, it feels fun even during serious discussions; it makes me laugh and I also get different opinions.

Problems: awkward phrase 'group of members', 'feels like funny', 'serious service', and singular 'opinion'. Type 26 (sentence structure) applies. Suggestion: simplify to 'When I chat with a group' and use 'fun' as adjective, 'serious discussions', and plural 'opinions'.

× Tura MMM closest friend I prefer to communicate with face to face because in face to face, umm, we can share all of the things and those things which which feels uncomfortable while chatting, uh, chatting.

✓ With my closest friend Tura, I prefer to communicate face to face because in person we can share everything, including things that feel uncomfortable when chatting online.

Problems: word order ('Tura MMM closest friend'), repeated words, awkward phrase 'in face to face'. Type 12 (pronouns) fits loosely for pronoun/word order issues; main issue is sentence structure. Suggestion: begin with 'With my closest friend Tura' and use 'in person' and 'when chatting online' for clarity.

× This make this makes uh, good uh, impression.

✓ This makes a good impression.

Problems: duplicate verbs 'make this makes', missing article before 'good impression'. Type 27 (subject-verb agreement) because 'this makes' is correct singular verb; also type 22 (article errors). Suggestion: use concise sentence 'This makes a good impression.'

× Yes, I usually argue with my friends because. They think they are always right while in the wrong season also.

✓ Yes, I usually argue with my friends because they often think they are always right even when they are wrong.

Problems: sentence fragment ('because.'), awkward phrase 'wrong season'. Type 26 (sentence structure) applies. Suggestion: combine into one sentence and use 'even when they are wrong'.

× So I advise them to not do any things wrong.

✓ So I advise them not to do anything wrong.

Problems: incorrect quantifier 'any things' should be 'anything', and 'to not do' is less natural than 'not to do' but both acceptable. Type 14 (quantifiers) applies. Suggestion: use 'anything' and place 'not' before infinitive for formality: 'advise them not to do anything wrong.'

× And those sons are different illegal activities but they do so I argue.

✓ And some of them are involved in different illegal activities, which is why I argue with them.

Problems: 'sons' likely incorrect for 'some', wrong word choice and sentence flow. Type 12 (pronouns/word choice) applies. Suggestion: use 'some of them' and 'are involved in illegal activities' and link clauses with 'which is why'.