聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct verb forms and plural/singular (friends) are needed. Avoid unclear phrases like “That we can know about which.”

範例: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends online, especially before bed, using Snapchat or Instagram. This helps us catch up about our day and stay connected even when we are busy.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and use correct verb tenses. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas. Be specific: mention topics and give a brief example. Avoid repetition and incorrect forms like “used going” or “we don't know didn't know.”

範例: We usually talk about our studies and daily life because we used to attend the same college but now we go to different ones. For example, I tell them about my classes and recent trips so they know what I have been doing.

建議: Answer directly and correct grammar. Use one clear reason and support it with a specific example. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like “for one girls” and “even they are.”

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because conversations feel more personal and private. For example, I can share personal experiences or problems without worrying about others judging me.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence and add one reason with a brief example. Use natural phrasing (prefer face-to-face) and correct grammar (meet up and talk). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more natural and I can read body language. For example, I usually meet a friend at a café so we can have a proper conversation without distractions.

建議: Start with a direct answer, then give a specific past example using correct past tense. Use linking words like however or when, but ensure tense consistency. Clarify the reason briefly.

範例: No, I don't argue with my friends now. However, when I was in primary school we often had small arguments online because we didn't know how to express ourselves politely.

× I like to chat with my friend.

✓ I like to chat with my friends.

The student uses singular 'friend' but refers to chatting with more than one friend earlier; plural 'friends' is appropriate when speaking generally. Use plural for general habits involving multiple people.

× We usually talking about our school because we used going to the same college but we transported another college so we don't know didn't know about our life.

✓ We usually talk about our school because we used to go to the same college, but we transferred to different colleges so we didn't know about each other's lives.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and word choice. 'Usually talking' should be 'usually talk' (simple present for habitual actions). 'Used going' should be 'used to go'. 'Transported' is incorrect for changing colleges; use 'transferred'. 'Don't know didn't know' is redundant and tense mismatch; context refers to past lack of knowledge so use 'didn't know'. Also 'our life' should be 'each other's lives' to show mutual knowledge.

× That we can know about which.

✓ That way we can keep up to date about each other.

The original fragment is ungrammatical and unclear. 'That way' introduces purpose; 'keep up to date about each other' clearly expresses the intended meaning. Restructure sentence to be complete and coherent.

× We usually talking about our school

✓ We usually talk about our school

Use simple present 'talk' for habitual actions. Present participle 'talking' would need an auxiliary (e.g., 'are talking') but for routines simple present is correct.

× we used going to the same college

✓ we used to go to the same college

The correct expression is 'used to' + base verb to describe a past habitual action. 'Used going' is incorrect; use 'used to go'.

× we transported another college

✓ we transferred to different colleges

'Transported' is wrong meaning 'moved something'. For changing schools use 'transferred'. Also 'another college' should be plural/different colleges to match context.

× so we don't know didn't know about our life.

✓ so we didn't know about each other's lives.

There's a tense conflict and redundancy: 'don't know didn't know' is wrong. Context is past, so use 'didn't know'. Use 'each other's lives' to show mutual information.

× So I always sharing about my day and then also my tour.

✓ So I always share my day and also talk about my trips.

'Always sharing' needs 'am always sharing' for present continuous or, better, simple present 'always share' for habitual action. 'Sharing about' is incorrect; use 'share' or 'talk about'. 'My tour' is unnatural; use 'my trips' or 'my day trips'.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because now I'm talking to for one girls and then I don't like to share my experience for the, uh, significant number of people, even they are.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because now I'm talking to one girl, and I don't like to share my experiences with a large number of people, even if they are close.

Multiple issues: 'for one girls' is ungrammatical—should be 'one girl' (singular). 'Share my experience for' should be 'share my experiences with'. 'Significant number of people' is okay but 'a large number of people' is more natural. 'Even they are' is incomplete; 'even if they are close' completes the idea.

× I prefer communication by face to face because I don't like to use social media for communication with them.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I don't like to use social media to communicate with them.

'Communication by face to face' is incorrect; use 'face-to-face communication'. Also use 'to communicate with' rather than 'for communication with'.

× So I usually meet up somewhere and we are talking by face to face.

✓ So I usually meet up somewhere and we talk face to face.

Use simple present 'talk' for habitual action. 'Are talking' implies right now. 'By face to face' is wrong; correct phrase is 'face to face' or 'in person'.

× However when I was in the primary school we always have argued on the online chat because we don't know how to use formal language.

✓ However, when I was in primary school we always argued in online chats because we didn't know how to use formal language.

Use simple past 'argued' for past habitual actions; 'have argued' is present perfect and unnecessary. 'On the online chat' should be 'in online chats'. 'Don't know' should be past 'didn't know' to match timeframe.