聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장 구조가 불완전하고 발음·어휘 사용에서 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 문장 주어와 동사를 정확히 사용하세요(예: 'I like chatting with my friends'). 불필요한 단어는 제거하고 앱 이름을 정확히 말하세요. 답변은 1문장으로 기본 응답을 주고, 필요하면 1~2개의 구체적 이유나 빈도를 덧붙이세요. 또한 연음·관사 사용에 신경 쓰고, 문장 끝을 명확히 마무리하세요.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. I usually use KakaoTalk to stay in touch because it’s convenient and many of my friends use it.

建議: 답변이 주제에서 벗어나고 불명확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답한 뒤 구체적인 주제(예: 학교, 취미, 계획 등)를 제시하세요. 연결어를 사용해 이유나 예를 덧붙이고, 앱 비교나 잡담은 제외하세요. 또한 불확실한 표현('What's WhatsApp?')은 피하고 자신 있는 어휘를 사용하세요.

範例: I usually talk about my daily life, school and hobbies with my friends. For example, we often share what we did that day and plan weekend activities together.

建議: 의사 전달은 되지만 말 흐림(filler)과 문장 연결이 약합니다. 자연스럽게 의견을 먼저 말한 뒤 이유를 두 가지 정도로 구체화하세요. 연결어('because', 'so', 'therefore')와 형용사 선택을 정확히 사용하고, 어색한 표현('more funny')을 교정하세요.

範例: It depends, but I usually prefer chatting in a group because it’s more fun and convenient. In a group we can plan activities together and everyone can share updates at once.

建議: 의견은 명확하지만 단어 선택과 문장 구조가 부정확합니다('directory' 사용 오류). 'face to face' 대신 'face-to-face'를 쓰고, 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요(예: 비언어적 신호, 즉각적 반응). 끝맺음은 간결하게 하세요.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for better eye contact and immediate feedback, which makes conversations clearer and more natural.

建議: 대답이 모호하고 이유가 불분명합니다. 먼저 빈도(never/sometimes/often)를 분명히 말하고, 논쟁이 발생하는 구체적 이유나 예를 제시하세요. 'argue'와 'discuss'의 차이를 이해하고 적절한 단어를 사용하세요.

範例: Sometimes we do argue, usually about small things like plans or misunderstandings. For instance, we once disagreed about where to go for a trip, but we resolved it by discussing everyone's preferences.

× Yes, I like to chatting with my friend so I usually. Check on Kakaotalk similar WhatsApp.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends, so I usually check Kakaotalk, which is similar to WhatsApp.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also use plural 'friends' for general habit (Grammar Problem Type 1) and correct prepositions/phrasing: 'check on Kakaotalk' -> 'check Kakaotalk' and 'similar to WhatsApp'. Suggestions: use 'like + -ing' for preferences, use plural for general references, and 'similar to' for comparisons.

× As I told you, I used Kakaotalk app to chat with my friend. Kakaoto is similar. What's WhatsApp? Uh. This Abbey is very famous in Korea.

✓ As I told you, I use the Kakaotalk app to chat with my friends. Kakaotalk is similar to WhatsApp. Uh, this app is very famous in Korea.

The student used past tense 'used' incorrectly for a habitual present action; use present tense 'use' (Grammar Problem Type 6 relates to present tense but error originates from past tense misuse, so treat as Past tense issue 5). Also 'Kakaoto' is a misspelling and 'What's WhatsApp?' is unnecessary; change 'Abbey' to 'app' and use plural 'friends'. Suggestions: use present tense for routines, spell app names correctly, and use 'similar to' for comparisons.

× Case by case, but I prefer to chat, uh, group. Because it's more funny and convenient.

✓ It depends on the case, but I prefer to chat in a group because it's more fun and convenient.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'a group' and incorrect article/phrase 'chat, uh, group' (Grammar Problem Type 17 and 11). 'More funny' is awkward; use 'more fun' (Grammar Problem Type 13). Suggestions: use 'in a group' for group context, and prefer 'fun' over 'funny' for enjoyable activities.

× I prefer to communicate with face to face because it is more directory and convenient, so I try to.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more direct and convenient, so I try to do that.

Incorrect preposition 'with' before 'face to face' (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'Directory' is a wrong word; correct adjective is 'direct' (Grammar Problem Type 13). Also add 'do that' to complete the sentence (Grammar Problem Type 23). Suggestions: say 'communicate face to face', use 'direct' to mean clear, and finish the sentence with a verb phrase.

× Maybe sometimes because, umm. We have another thing. So sometimes we discuss.

✓ Maybe sometimes, because we have other things to discuss, we end up arguing. So sometimes we discuss.

Fragmented and unclear sentences; 'We have another thing' is unnatural and vague (Grammar Problem Type 26). Rephrase to show cause and effect and combine into coherent sentences. Suggestions: specify 'other things to discuss' and connect the ideas into full sentences indicating reason and result.