聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy (e.g., "chatting" repeated).

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It helps me share how I feel and explain my opinions clearly; for example, I often talk about my plans for the weekend or ask for advice when I'm stressed.

建議: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence then specific examples. Use correct grammar and linking phrases (for example, "mainly," "for instance"). Avoid unclear phrases like "I am in my other charter."

範例: We mainly talk about our daily routines and studies. For instance, we ask each other what we are doing now, how our day went, and we discuss homework tasks such as upcoming assignments and deadlines.

建議: Clarify personality description and contrast reasons clearly. Use linking words like "however" and correct articles and pronouns. Keep it to two or three concise sentences with a clear preference and an exception.

範例: I usually prefer chatting one-on-one because I feel more comfortable sharing personal stories. However, when we discuss homework I prefer group chats, as more people can suggest solutions to problems.

建議: Answer directly and give specific reasons. Fix grammar and avoid repetition. Explain one or two advantages of social media vs face-to-face with clear linking words.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is convenient and gives me time to think before replying. For example, I can ask questions or share documents instantly without arranging a meeting.

建議: Start with a direct statement about how often you argue, then give a specific example. Correct verb forms and word order, and use a linking phrase like "however" or "sometimes."

範例: Rarely. However, sometimes we argue about homework deadlines—for example, when a friend forgets to remind me about a due date, we might disagree until we quickly resolve it by setting reminders.

× I love chatting with my friends because through the chatting I conference my feelings to my friends, what I want, what I do now and I clearly explained my point of view to my friends Viva chatting.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because through chatting I convey my feelings to them, tell them what I want and what I am doing now, and clearly explain my point of view to my friends. I enjoy chatting.

Problems: 'through the chatting' should be 'through chatting' or 'by chatting' (preposition/article use). 'conference my feelings' is incorrect verb; use 'convey'. Repeated 'to my friends' can be replaced with pronoun 'them'. Tense consistency: 'I clearly explained' should be present tense 'I clearly explain' to match habitual action; or progressive 'am doing' for current action. 'Viva chatting' is not standard; replace with 'I enjoy chatting'. Suggestion: use correct verbs (convey, tell, explain), maintain present tense for habitual actions, and use appropriate prepositions/articles.

× I am in my other charter. We usually do about our daily routines. What are you doing now and what's your future goals? How was your day going? And they usually about our homework, which subject, which work we get and what we when we have to do.

✓ I am in another chapter. We usually talk about our daily routines, such as what we are doing now and our future goals. We ask 'How is your day going?' and we usually talk about our homework, which subjects and tasks we have and when we need to do them.

Problems: sentence fragments and incorrect word choices ('charter' should be 'chapter' or 'class/group'; unclear structure). 'We usually do about' is ungrammatical; use 'talk about'. Question forms: 'What are you doing now and what's your future goals?' - use 'what your future goals are' or rephrase. 'How was your day going?' incorrect tense; use 'How is your day going?' or 'How was your day?' Homework clause: 'which work we get and what we when we have to do' is jumbled; clarify to 'which subjects and tasks we have and when we need to do them'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct verbs (talk about), maintain consistent tense, and order information clearly.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am a naughty extrovert.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am a playful extrovert.

Problem: 'naughty' is used incorrectly to describe a person's social style; it usually refers to misbehaving children. Use adjectives like 'playful', 'lively', or simply 'an extrovert'. Suggestion: choose adjectives appropriate to adult behavior and the context.

× I do not want to share my personal stories to everyone.

✓ I do not want to share my personal stories with everyone.

Problem: preposition with 'share' should be 'share ... with', not 'share ... to'. This is a preposition/pronoun usage issue; 'everyone' is fine as object but must follow 'with'. Suggestion: use 'share ... with' when indicating the people who receive the information.

× On the other hand, if I usually talk about the my homework, I prefer to chat with the group of people because if I have conflict then other one I have a solutions of that question.

✓ On the other hand, if I usually talk about my homework, I prefer to chat with a group of people because if I have a problem then others can help me find a solution.

Problems: extra article 'the my homework' should be 'my homework'. 'If I have conflict' should be 'if I have a problem'. 'Other one I have a solutions of that question' is ungrammatical; use 'others can help me find a solution'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, use 'a group' not 'the group' unless specific, and ensure subject-verb and number agreement ('others can', 'a solution').

× I pray prefer to communicate via social media because it is easy to communicate.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it is easy.

Problems: 'pray' is incorrect word insertion; possibly 'I prefer' alone suffices. Repetition 'to communicate' is redundant. Suggestion: remove extraneous words and avoid repetition.

× We easily the easily communicate making conservation with the social media by which we think about what we have to say. We get a time and.

✓ We can easily communicate and make conversations on social media, which gives us time to think about what we want to say.

Problems: word order and repeated words ('easily the easily'); 'making conservation' should be 'have conversations'. 'We get a time and.' is incomplete; clarify intention: 'gives us time'. Suggestion: use subject + modal + verb structure ('we can easily communicate'), use correct nouns ('conversations'), and complete sentences.

× Not at all, but sometimes I argue with my friends on the topic of homework because my friend does not remind me when the due date is deadline of my other assignments.

✓ Not at all, but sometimes I argue with my friends about homework because my friend does not remind me of the due dates for my other assignments.

Problems: 'on the topic of' is OK but 'about' is more natural here. 'Does not remind me when the due date is deadline of my other assignments' is ungrammatical; use 'remind me of the due dates'. The word 'deadline' is redundant with 'due date'. Suggestion: use 'remind me of' + noun, and pluralize 'due dates' to match 'assignments'.

× She forget and but after sometime please resolve it quickly.

✓ She forgets, but after some time she resolves it quickly.

Problems: verb form 'forget' should be 'forgets' for third person singular (Third person singular issue, ID 2) and sentence order is incorrect. 'After sometime' should be 'after some time'. 'Please' is out of place; if speaking politely, use 'she resolves it quickly' or 'she usually resolves it quickly'. Suggestion: use correct third person singular verb endings, correct adverbial phrases ('after some time'), and remove misplaced words.