聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говорите более связно и грамматически корректно: начните с короткого прямого ответа, затем поясните причину. Избегайте тавтологии (chatting / talk) и исправьте порядок слов и формы глаголов. Добавьте связку для плавного перехода, например “because” или “so”.

範例: Yes, I do. However, I prefer meeting friends in person because I find it important to see their facial expressions and body language, which you can't get through chatting online.

建議: Сформулируйте краткий основной ответ и затем добавьте конкретные детали. Исправьте грамматические ошибки (were → are, another topics → other topics, to chatting → to chat) и используйте связку «because» или «so» для логики.

範例: We usually talk about school and homework because we spend most of the day together and often share the same classes and assignments.

建議: Дайте чёткий выбор и разверните ответ с правильной грамматикой. Уберите неясные формулировки («own opinions worlds») и замените их конкретными выражениями. Используйте связки «because» и «for example» для примеров.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because it's more interesting — there are many different opinions and perspectives to hear, which makes the conversation livelier.

建議: Отвечайте полно и корректно: начните с полного предложения и избегайте повторов. Уточните мысль о том, почему лицевая коммуникация надёжнее, исправьте местоимения и время. Добавьте связующее слово «so» или «because» и конкретный пример.

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because you can read someone's facial expressions and tone of voice, so it's harder for them to hide their true feelings compared with social media.

建議: Сделайте ответ более естественным и кратким: начните с прямого утверждения, затем объясните причину и, если нужно, добавьте пример. Избегайте повторов и слов-паразитов («uh, yeah») и используйте связки «because» и «for example».

範例: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we share similar views and get along well; for example, we usually agree on our study plans and free-time activities.

× Definitely, yeah. But for me more important to see emotions of these people which I talk, then chatting.

✓ Definitely, yeah. But for me it is more important to see the emotions of the people I am talking to than to chat.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'is' for the present simple ('it is more important') and uses incorrect relative clause structure ('which I talk' should be 'I am talking to'). The comparison 'then chatting' is incorrect; use 'than to chat' to compare activities. Suggestion: include the verb 'is', use 'the people I am talking to', and use 'than to + base verb' for comparisons.

× And because of this I prefer talk face to face than chatting.

✓ And because of this I prefer to talk face to face rather than chat.

After 'prefer' when comparing two activities use 'prefer to do X rather than do Y' or 'prefer doing X to doing Y'. The original misses 'to' before 'talk' and mixes structures ('than chatting'). Suggestion: use 'prefer to talk ... rather than chat' or 'prefer talking ... to chatting'.

× I usually chat with my friends about the school or homework because we were together all day and we don't have another topics to chatting.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about school or homework because we are together all day and we don't have other topics to chat about.

Tense inconsistency: 'we were together' should be present 'we are together' for habitual actions. 'the school' is unnecessary; use 'school' generally. 'another topics' is incorrect quantifier and number; use 'other topics'. 'to chatting' wrong form; use 'to chat about'. Suggestion: keep present simple for routines and use correct noun forms and prepositional phrases.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people than with only one friend because for me it's more interesting.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than with only one friend because for me it's more interesting.

Comparison requires 'rather than' not just 'than' when contrasting verbs or actions. The preposition use 'with' is fine, but the comparative connector should be 'rather than'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A rather than B' for clarity.

× There have so many own opinions worlds and it's interesting for me.

✓ There are so many different opinions and it's interesting for me.

'There have' is ungrammatical; use 'there are' for existence. 'own opinions worlds' is incorrect word order and choice; likely meant 'different opinions' or 'opinions of their own'. Suggestion: use 'there are so many different opinions' or 'people have opinions of their own'.

× Definitely. I prefer to communicate face to face because I can't see these people's emotions and uh, he can't lie.

✓ Definitely. I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see people's emotions and they can't hide them.

Pronoun reference error and verb mismatch: 'he can't lie' incorrectly refers to a singular male; use plural 'they' or 'people' and adjust verb meaning — people can lie but may hide emotions; 'can't hide' or 'can't lie' is unclear. Also 'can't see these people's emotions' contradicts preference; corrected to 'I can see'. Suggestion: use consistent plural pronouns and clear verb choice.

× For me, when we communicate face to face, when people chatting with the social media, they can lie and we don't see his emotions.

✓ For me, when we communicate face to face, but when people chat on social media they can lie and we don't see their emotions.

Use base verb 'chat' after 'when people' (not 'chatting'). Preposition with 'social media' should be 'on social media'. Pronoun 'his' should match plural 'their'. Also sentence structure improved with contrast 'but'. Suggestion: use 'when people chat on social media' and 'their emotions'.

× I never argue with my friends about something because we have a similar idea, similar opinions, and uh yeah, I never argue with my friends.

✓ I never argue with my friends about anything because we have similar ideas and opinions.

Use 'anything' in negative contexts instead of 'something'. Repetition of 'I never argue with my friends' is unnecessary. 'a similar idea, similar opinions' should be plural 'similar ideas and opinions' or 'similar opinions'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use 'anything' in negative statements.