聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is friendly and relevant but has grammar mistakes, repetition and unclear phrasing. Improve by giving one clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with correct tense and word choice. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases (e.g. "sharing").

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, we often talk about our day or funny incidents, so I feel less stressed and more connected.

建議: Good content but phrasing and fluency need work. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and reasons using linking words such as "for example" or "because." Avoid filler sounds ("umm") and use correct noun-verb forms ("conflicts at work").

範例: I usually chat about everyday life and personal issues, especially work-related stress. For example, if I have a conflict at work, I explain the situation to a friend because talking helps me find solutions and feel calmer.

建議: The idea is clear but sentence structure, pronouns and word choice are confusing. Give one clear preference sentence, then explain briefly why with correct grammar. Use linking words like "because" and avoid fragmented endings.

範例: I prefer talking to one or two close friends because I feel more comfortable sharing personal matters. For example, I usually confide in a close friend when I need advice rather than speaking in a large group.

建議: Clear comparison but grammar and vocabulary need correction. Make a clear contrasting structure using linking words like "however" or "but." Correct verb forms ("it depends", "I do it through social media"). Be specific about types of topics for each mode.

範例: It depends: for casual or quick updates I use social media because it is convenient. However, for deep or sensitive conversations I prefer face-to-face meetings because they feel more secure and personal.

建議: You answer addresses the question but is repetitive and unclear. Give a concise topic sentence, then one specific example and a brief reason. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds, and finish the thought coherently.

範例: Yes, we sometimes argue, but the disagreements are minor. For instance, when shopping we might disagree about what to buy, but we usually laugh it off and it does not affect our friendship.

× Is I kind of relaxing and released my stress after being working a long day.

✓ It is kind of relaxing and releases my stress after working a long day.

The original uses the wrong subject pronoun 'Is I' and inconsistent verb forms. Use 'It is' to refer to chatting generally. 'Releases' matches present simple habitual action. Remove 'being' before 'working' and use 'after working a long day' for correct gerund phrase.

× I like to chatting with my friends about my daily life, my personal umm issues.

✓ I like chatting with my friends about my daily life and my personal issues.

After 'like' you can use either the infinitive ('to chat') or the gerund ('chatting'), but not 'to chatting'. Using 'chatting' (gerund) is natural here and 'and' connects the two nouns.

× sometimes you have a stress at work or some umm conflicts at works and you need someone to to talk to and release out.

✓ sometimes you have stress at work or some conflicts at work and you need someone to talk to and let it out.

Use 'stress' without an article. The preposition 'at work' is singular. 'Release out' is incorrect; use 'let it out' or 'release it'. Remove the duplicate 'to'.

× Well, I don't have many friend actually, I mean close friends.

✓ Well, I don't have many friends actually; I mean, close friends.

Use plural 'friends' for countable plural. Adding a semicolon or period clarifies the pause; include commas for clarity.

× Umm, I rather speak to Michael close friends, which I have one or two rather than like, you know, sharing that to to others friends that I'm not so close because I find it's more comfortable and sometimes.

✓ Umm, I'd rather speak to my close friends, maybe one or two, rather than sharing things with other friends I'm not so close to because I find it more comfortable sometimes.

Use contraction 'I'd rather' for preference. 'My close friends' shows possession. 'Which I have' is incorrect; use 'maybe one or two'. Use 'sharing things with' for correct preposition and word order. Place 'to' after 'close' for 'close to' only when indicating emotional closeness: here use 'friends I'm not so close to'. Move 'sometimes' to sentence end.

× Uh, it's depends I would say if I went to uh, sharing my thoughts, probably umm I doing through social medias.

✓ Uh, it depends, I would say; if I want to share my thoughts, I probably do it through social media.

Use 'it depends' (no 's' after 'it' is fine: 'depends' is correct with 'it'). Use present tense 'want' to match general preference, not 'went'. 'Sharing' should be an infinitive or noun phrase 'to share my thoughts'. 'I doing' is incorrect; use 'I do it'. 'Social media' is uncountable in this context.

× But if I want to talk about something deeply I write to umm talk face to face with friends or family which I thought is more secure and comfortable.

✓ But if I want to talk about something deeply, I prefer to talk face to face with friends or family, which I think is more secure and comfortable.

'Write to talk' is wrong; use 'prefer to talk' or 'I choose to talk'. Use present 'think' not 'thought' for current opinion. Add commas for clarity.

× I would say I do argue a lot, but it's not that serious.

✓ I would say I do argue a lot, but it's not that serious.

No grammatical correction needed in this sentence based on the given list; phrase is acceptable. (Included for completeness.)

× Like it's usually some umm, simple thing like, you know, like when we go shopping and she likes does and I like the different thing is not a serious thing.

✓ It's usually some simple thing, like when we go shopping and she likes one thing and I like something different; it's not serious.

Replace 'she likes does' with 'she likes one thing' and 'I like the different thing' with 'I like something different' for clarity and correct pronoun use. Combine clauses and use semicolon to join related ideas. Remove redundant words.

× So sometime, umm, I, I think some.

✓ So sometimes, I guess, I just let it go.

The original ends abruptly and lacks a clear verb and object. Provide a complete clause 'I just let it go' to convey meaning. 'Sometimes' is the correct adverb form.