聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more fluent and clear: remove filler words (uh), correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points. Keep within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like “because” and “so” correctly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my spare time because I often learn useful things from them. For example, they give me tips about studying and new hobbies. Also, talking helps me practise expressing my ideas more confidently.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and specific examples; avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, such as) and correct nouns. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: We usually talk about everyday topics such as work and travel. For example, we share travel plans and recommend places to visit, and sometimes we discuss video games or TV shows we enjoy.

建議: Clarify meaning and fix awkward phrases. Start with a direct topic sentence, then explain with reasons and one example. Use linking words like “because” or “so”.

範例: It depends on the topic: I prefer one-on-one conversations for private matters, such as family issues, because I feel more comfortable. However, I prefer group discussions for work-related problems since more people can offer different solutions.

建議: Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and make the sentence natural. Begin with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like “the object I'm talking with”.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read people’s facial expressions and body language. This helps me understand their feelings better and express my ideas more precisely.

建議: Be more specific and grammatically correct. Use conditional sentences correctly and avoid emotional or unclear phrasing. Provide a brief example or reason to support your statement.

範例: Not often, but sometimes I argue with friends if they are rude or ignore my opinion. For instance, if someone speaks to me disrespectfully, I will calmly explain why I disagree rather than shout.

× Also I think it's kind of a challenge to output my ideas and if I get something wrong I my friends.

✓ Also I think it's kind of a challenge to output my ideas and if I get something wrong my friends correct me.

Missing verb: 'correct' in past participle form 'correct me' is needed to complete the clause. The student omitted the verb, making the sentence ungrammatical. Use a verb after the subject 'my friends' to show the action. Suggestion: always check that each clause has a verb and object where required.

× Where Orlando scenes like work, uh, traveling, we will share these kind of things with each other and, uh, games sometimes we will talk about.

✓ We usually talk about ordinary things like work and traveling; we also sometimes talk about games.

Original sentence has unclear phrasing and incorrect word choice ('Where Orlando scenes') and wrong structure ('these kind of things' and misplaced clauses). 'These kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' or 'this kind of thing' (quantifier agreement), but the main issue is sentence structure and word choice. Rephrase to a clear subject-verb order and logical listing. Suggestion: list items clearly using 'like' for examples and keep clauses concise.

× If it's private for me, like something about my family, I prefer to chat with only one friend.

✓ If it's private, for example something about my family, I prefer to chat with only one friend.

'Private for me' is awkward; use 'private' or 'private to me' and add a clearer connector. Pronoun/phrase placement caused unnatural phrasing. Suggestion: place qualifiers after 'If it's private' or use 'for example' to introduce examples.

× I prefer to communicate face to face 'cause when we talk in person, I can perceive how the object I'm talking with feelings and I can express my idea more precisely.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when we talk in person, I can perceive the feelings of the person I'm talking to and I can express my ideas more precisely.

Several preposition and noun usage errors: 'object I'm talking with' is wrong; use 'the person I'm talking to' and 'feelings of' (prepositional object). Also 'cause' is informal; use 'because' in formal speech. 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match general meaning. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('to' after 'talking') and possessive structures ('feelings of the person').

× If he was lost his mind or I think the impolite or rude to me, I will argue with them.

✓ If he loses his mind or I think he is being impolite or rude to me, I will argue with him.

Multiple issues: tense and subject-verb agreement ('was lost his mind' is incorrect; use 'loses his mind' or 'has lost his mind'), pronoun agreement ('them' vs 'he/him'), and missing auxiliary 'is' for 'being impolite'. The conditional 'If' with present verb pairs with 'will' in main clause for likely future. Suggestion: use correct verb forms ('loses' or 'has lost') and match pronouns ('him' for singular 'he'); include 'is' before 'impolite' to form a predicate.

× Where Orlando scenes like work, uh, traveling, we will share these kind of things with each other and, uh, games sometimes we will talk about.

✓ We usually talk about things like work and traveling, and sometimes we talk about games.

'These kind of things' is incorrect quantifier agreement; it should be 'these kinds of things' or 'these kinds of topics' or simply 'things'. The sentence was also restructured for clarity. Suggestion: use 'things like' or 'kinds of' correctly and keep number agreement between demonstrative and noun ('these kinds').

× If he was lost his mind or I think the impolite or rude to me, I will argue with them.

✓ If he loses his mind or I think he is being impolite or rude to me, I will argue with him.

In conditional clauses talking about habitual or likely future situations, use present simple for the 'if' clause: 'he loses' (third person singular) rather than 'was lost'. Ensure verbs agree with third person singular subjects. Suggestion: remember to add -s for third person singular present verbs.