聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban perlu lebih alami dan langsung menjawab. Perbaiki tata bahasa (mis. 'my friend' → 'my friends'), gunakan 1 topik utama, dan tambahkan 1-2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik dengan linking word seperti 'because' atau 'so'. Hindari kalimat yang tidak jelas seperti 'chat in them'.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. For example, we often talk about our day and share funny stories, which lifts my mood.

建議: Jawaban perlu lebih spesifik dan tata bahasa diperbaiki ('It depends' bukan 'It's depends'). Mulai dengan topik utama lalu beri contoh konkret. Gunakan linking words seperti 'for example' atau 'usually'.

範例: It depends, but usually we talk about our daily lives or interesting news. For example, if I have something new to share, like a recent trip or a work update, that's what we discuss.

建議: Jawaban perlu lebih rapi dan fokus. Jelaskan kondisi yang membuat Anda memilih satu atau kelompok dengan struktur 'I prefer ... when ... because ...'. Hindari filler seperti 'uh' dan frasa yang tidak jelas seperti 'all foreign Hangouts'. Berikan contoh konkret.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group when we want to have fun or plan events, because there are more opinions. But I prefer one-on-one chats when I need to discuss personal problems, for example I would tell my best friend about something stressful.

建議: Jawaban sudah jelas tapi perbaiki tata bahasa ('I prefer' bukan 'I purpose choose') dan singkatkan menjadi dua kalimat. Tambahkan alasan spesifik dan contoh kecil untuk memperkuat.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's clearer and you can read body language. For example, when discussing important matters I choose to meet in person to avoid misunderstandings.

建議: Jawaban singkat jadi perlu sedikit dikembangkan. Gunakan struktur yang lebih alami: 'Sometimes I do, but only when...' dan jelaskan alasan konkret mengapa argumen terjadi. Hindari frasa tanya di akhir tanpa penjelasan.

範例: Sometimes I argue with friends, but usually only when we disagree about important issues or when trust is broken. For instance, I once argued with a friend over missed promises because it affected our plans.

× Personally, I love chatting with my friend because it makes me enjoy and feel happy for it.

✓ Personally, I love chatting with my friends because it makes me enjoy myself and feel happy.

The student used singular 'my friend' but speaks generally, so plural 'my friends' fits better (subject consistency). 'Makes me enjoy and feel happy for it' is unnatural: use 'makes me enjoy myself and feel happy.' Use reflexive 'myself' and remove redundant 'for it'. Suggestion: choose plural when referring to friends in general and use 'enjoy myself' for personal enjoyment.

× When I don't have my friends around me, I would chat in them.

✓ When I don't have my friends around me, I would chat with them.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'chat'; the correct collocation is 'chat with someone.' Replace 'in them' with 'with them.' Also keep 'friends' plural for consistency.

× It's depends on what the topic that we talking about.

✓ It depends on what topic we are talking about.

Use simple present 'depends' without contraction 'It's depends' (subject-verb agreement). 'What the topic that we talking about' is ungrammatical: remove extra 'the' and use present continuous 'we are talking about.' Suggestion: 'It depends on what topic we are talking about.'

× Like for example I have some news for it, maybe that is the topic for our chat.

✓ For example, if I have some news, that might be the topic of our chat.

'Like for example' is redundant; start with 'For example.' 'I have some news for it' is incorrect—use 'if I have some news.' 'Topic for our chat' is better expressed as 'topic of our chat.' Use modal 'might' to express possibility.

× It depends when I check on the group, maybe it's for fun and all foreign Hangouts, but if I prefer to chat with one, people that I only trust may uh, for example, like my best friend, I want to tell him about my problem. That's it.

✓ It depends: when I join a group it is for fun and casual hangouts, but if I prefer to chat with one person, I choose someone I trust, for example my best friend, because I want to tell him about my problems.

Original sentence is run-on and unclear. 'Check on the group' should be 'join a group.' 'All foreign Hangouts' is unclear; likely 'casual hangouts.' Use parallel structure: contrast group chats and one-on-one chats. Replace 'people that I only trust' with 'someone I trust.' Make verb forms consistent and pluralize 'problem' to 'problems' or use 'a problem' depending on meaning. Suggestions: break into clearer clauses and use proper connectors.

× I purpose choose to face to face because it's more clear to communicate than social media, because in social media it can be misinformation.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is clearer than social media, which can contain misinformation.

'I purpose choose to face to face' is incorrect. Use 'I prefer to communicate face-to-face.' 'More clear' should be 'clearer.' Compare 'than social media' directly. 'In social media it can be misinformation' is awkward; use 'which can contain misinformation.' Also hyphenate 'face-to-face.'

× That's why I chose face to face.

✓ That's why I choose face-to-face.

Tense mismatch: the student is stating a habitual preference in the present, so use present 'choose' not past 'chose.' Keep 'face-to-face' hyphenated. Suggestion: use present tense for general preferences.

× Sometimes yes but sometimes I don't because it depends on him.

✓ Sometimes, yes, but sometimes I don't; it depends on him.

Mainly punctuation and clarity: original missed 'on' after 'depends' which is present. 'It depends on him' is acceptable but ambiguous; consider 'it depends on him' meaning his behavior. Suggestion: keep 'depends on him' and add commas/semicolon for clarity.

× Like can I trust him or not?

✓ For example, can I trust him or not?

Starting with 'Like' is informal and ungrammatical here; use 'For example' or simply remove it. Otherwise the sentence is fine as a question. Suggestion: avoid filler 'like' in formal responses.