聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the grammar and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief reason. Avoid unnecessary words. For example, change "it's put me in a good mood" to "it puts me in a good mood."

範例: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it puts me in a good mood. It helps me relax after a long day and often leads to funny stories or useful advice.

建議: Organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence about typical topics, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetition. For example, say what topics you discuss and give a brief, specific example (e.g., football).

範例: We usually talk about our hobbies and daily life. For example, most of my friends play football, so we often discuss recent matches, training tips, and plans to play at the weekend.

建議: Provide a direct preference first, then explain with specific reasons and linking words (e.g., "because," "however"). Correct word choice ("chat" not "charts") and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it to two or three sentences.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because you can share more stories and get different opinions. However, sometimes I like talking to one friend when I want deeper or more private conversations.

建議: Give a clear preference and two concise reasons, using correct grammar and linking words. Replace incorrect phrases ("it's make me in a good mood") with "it makes me happy" and use adjectives correctly ("more lively and effective").

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it makes me happier and the conversation feels more lively. Also, you can read body language, which helps avoid misunderstandings.

建議: Answer directly, then give a clear reason with proper grammar and linking words. Replace awkward phrasing ("I enjoy we discuss") with "I enjoy discussing new topics" and explain briefly why arguments are avoided.

範例: No, I usually don't argue with friends because I enjoy discussing new topics calmly. We try to avoid deep arguments since they can cause problems and damage our friendship.

× Yes, I enjoy it because it's put me in a good mood.

✓ Yes, I enjoy it because it puts me in a good mood.

The student used 'it's put' which mixes a contraction of 'it is' with a past participle 'put'. The intended meaning is a habitual present effect, so the simple present 'puts' is correct (subject-verb agreement and present tense). Use 'it puts' to indicate a regular result.

× We have a lot of things to chat, but I think the most important thing, it's uh, thoughtful because, uh.

✓ We have a lot of things to talk about, but I think the most important thing is being thoughtful.

'Have a lot of things to chat' is incorrect collocation; use 'things to talk about'. The phrase 'the most important thing, it's' is an incorrect sentence structure; replace with 'the most important thing is'. 'Thoughtful' as a noun idea is better expressed as 'being thoughtful' or 'thoughtfulness'. This corrects verb/noun form and sentence structure.

× All of them, they play football and they enjoy football.

✓ They all play football and enjoy it.

Using both 'All of them' and 'they' is redundant. 'They all' is concise subject placement. Also avoid repeating 'football' twice; use a pronoun 'it'. This fixes redundancy and improves subject-verb placement.

× I believe charts with a group it's important thing because sometimes you need to share a lot of stories with them and maybe they they can give you a lot of stories, but on other hand you're just one friend can tell you maybe.

✓ I believe chatting with a group is important because sometimes you need to share a lot of stories with them and they can tell you many things, while one friend may only tell you a little.

Multiple issues: 'charts' is a misspelling of 'chatting'; 'it's important thing' should be 'is important' and include the gerund 'chatting'. Pronoun and subject errors: 'maybe they they' duplicates 'they'; 'give you a lot of stories' is better as 'tell you many things'; 'on other hand you're just one friend can tell you maybe' is ungrammatical — rephrase to compare group vs one friend. This corrects pronouns, verb forms, word choice, and sentence flow.

× I prefer speak face to face because it's make me in a good mood and usually if you speak with friends face to face it's make the conversation more lively and effectively and friend.

✓ I prefer speaking face to face because it makes me in a good mood, and usually if you speak with friends face to face it makes the conversation more lively and effective.

After 'prefer' use the gerund 'speaking'. 'It's make' is incorrect; use 'it makes' (third person singular). 'Effectively' is an adverb; here an adjective 'effective' modifies 'conversation'. Remove the trailing 'and friend' which is unclear. This fixes verb form, gerund use, subject-verb agreement, and adjective/adverb choice.

× No, I don't because I enjoy we discuss about a new topic, but we don't have a deep, uh, argument because it's make, uh, sometimes problem for us and we don't prefer that.

✓ No, I don't, because I enjoy discussing new topics, and we don't have deep arguments because they sometimes cause problems for us and we prefer to avoid that.

After 'enjoy' use gerund 'discussing' not 'we discuss'. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; use 'discuss' or 'talk about'. 'We don't have a deep argument' should be plural or general 'deep arguments'. 'It's make' is ungrammatical; use 'they sometimes cause' to match plural 'arguments'. 'We don't prefer that' is awkward; 'we prefer to avoid that' is natural. This corrects tense/form and improves clarity.